Recent Comments

8/25/23, 1:10 AM
I started reading not expecting much, but I was surprised by the quick and depraved evolution of Jon's transformation into Sterling. I was positively turned on by the idea of the numerous piercings on his cock and balls. And also with the reds addiction treatment that turned him into a chain smoker. I look forward to the continuation of the story, with the various abuses and pleasures that sterling will receive in his new profession. And for explaining how he was conditioned to be such a devoted slave to his master. For me this will be the icing on the cake that will make the story incredible.
8/25/23, 1:08 AM
I hope there will be a part 2.
8/23/23, 11:33 PM
Hola!! Bienvenido al sitio, es bueno que la comunidad de escritores en español siga creciendo. Buen primer capitulo

8/25/23, 12:06 AM
@[Eduardo Robles](/user/show/78353) Muchas gracias, un amigo me habló de este sitio y estoy enamorado de la cantidad de historias que hay aquí, quizá eventualmente la suba en inglés aunque sea usando el traductor.
8/25/23, 12:04 AM
Please continue the story. Don't worry about the translator issue, it's understandable, I'm new here, I came because I wanted to share my stories, I'm doing it in Spanish and if someone wants to read them in their language they can do it from Google Chrome. But please continue your story, it sounds like it will be interesting
Jun 7, 2022
8/25/23, 12:02 AM
I really enjoyed the evolution of the story. James was ensnared during the previous night's revelry and proceeded unaware of the progression of the transformation with little resistance, perhaps due to his hangover. I feel that this new persona that he has taken on needs to be explored more, but leaving to the imagination all the things he can do is also a great ending. As a suggestion, I believe that when he arrives at the cigar shop, as recognized by the owner, there could have been a steamy scene between the two of them involving some cigar smoke. After all, the two could go to a private smoking room to be attended by a helper. But that's my imagination running wild. Congratulations on writing this beautiful story. I will fantasize many sequels of it from now on.
8/24/23, 11:49 PM
When is the next one coming?
Whitey
8/24/23, 10:08 PM
Great story! Loved that not only did the heroes go down, so did the entire police force!
8/24/23, 9:57 PM
I appreciate all.the effort it took to rewrite the chapter and am sorry it made you doubt about your kinks. But I much preferred the previous version, which to me represented the ultimate FANTASY. Keep up the good work!
Jun 8, 2022
Kametzer
6/8/22, 11:15 PM
As a 415 lbs chub that’s been greying, drinking gallons of whole milk, and put on 65 lbs this year…who’s 33 and looks 40 with all the grey…this spoke to me on a deep level.

Anonymous
8/24/23, 8:33 PM
@Kametzer now this is a story I need to hear!