Recent Comments

Martin
8/23/23, 5:23 PM
Could you please make your chapters a little longer in the future? They should have more than 1000 words. For now I've approved it, but usually we need at least 1000 words per chapter. Thanks.
8/22/23, 7:51 PM
Welcome to the writer's room!!! You've done a good job for your first submission. It definitely has room to go in different directions if you want to continue on with it. You could definitely explore the relationship between Gavin and Anthony and its effect on Anthony's life as Chief and husband and father. Or you could just explore the relationship in and of itself. I could see Gavin being brought in the department and working his technique in a lieutenant or sergeant or two or three. But your first piece is a very good start for your pieces on this site; so welcome again to the writer's side of the site and please keep on producing stories like these.

8/23/23, 5:03 PM
@[New Guy in Town](/user/show/820450) Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I've been writing another longer-form story with similar power dynamics, hopefully I could explore those possibilities there.
8/23/23, 5:02 PM
The concept is inspired and I really like how you break the father/son line. Once you cross the line, don't hold back. Give me some of their memories together. Get BAD!
8/23/23, 12:43 AM
First things first: This was amazing. Well written and paced. Showing the characters and all that. Well described and consisten. Sublime. On a second note, love it. It has almost everything I like to see. Big strong hetero DILF in a position of power enslaved by a yonger man and made into a bottom. Unaware of this being wrong! I'd have loved some feet into the mis but thats just a personal taste, that does not rest any point to this story. Please keep it up~

8/23/23, 4:58 PM
@[Udems](/user/show/16223) Hey. Appreciate the kind words! I did not have the word DILF in mind when I wrote it, but it did turn out that way. :D
Whitey
8/23/23, 4:53 PM
Really hit a lot of my hot buttons - men in authority brought down, uniforms, brainwashing, unaware of the destruction of his life. And so many directions the story could go - other cops, others in the chief's personal life, former military friends. How low can the chief be taken, in his uniform in his office, in his car, in a jail cell? Lived it!
Aug 22, 2023
8/23/23, 7:17 AM
Once in a blue moon a gem appears on this forum. Occasionally you want a story with heart, and you delivered that in spades. Thanks!

8/23/23, 4:30 PM
@[leedsdevil](/user/show/910157) Wow! You made my morning! I wasn't sure if this one fit the site and your thoughts on it -- a story with heart -- are making me think maybe it does. All the best, and thank you, J-Son
Aug 22, 2023
8/22/23, 11:57 PM
A great example of how to grow into a man with no toxic masculinity.

8/23/23, 4:28 PM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Thank you for your comment! I really appreciate you taking the time to tell me what you took from the story -- this one is important to me, and I'm flying pretty high knowing you liked it. All the best, J-Son
Zander
8/23/23, 2:16 PM
This is one of the best recent works on the site. I really look forward to continuing and I look forward to what will happen to Romeo) he is the main character of this story (I hope Incubus will have great difficulties with him).
Apr 28, 2022
4/28/22, 4:35 PM
That was a fun ride, I would love a part 2
Apr 28, 2022
Anonymous
4/29/22, 8:06 AM
Sizzling hot. Me want more of that orc.