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8/18/23, 7:06 PM
So hot. I’d love to be your Danny in real life.

8/21/23, 2:43 AM
@[KinkyNickInSea](/user/show/17305) Thanks little Danny man.
8/17/23, 10:44 AM
You are definitely putting a lot of of effort in this one . I really like it .

8/21/23, 2:41 AM
@[welan](/user/show/114561) Thanks man. I love the thrill of writing
Harlyrocket3069
8/17/23, 8:02 PM
I'm really hoping Kyle can get a happy ending .let him have his old self back but maybe with a permanent twist to him But please give him a happy ending

NO
8/20/23, 5:29 PM
@Harlyrocket3069 Why so, man? If you don't like how the story is going that you don't like Kyle suffering then, sorry, don't read it. If the author had a certain ending in his mind, then it would not be nice to ask him to change it to your liking, would it? Plus other people had commented they preferred Kyle suffering. You're pressuring the author. I would really like it if Plymouth makes the story as he sees fit and the feedback would be considered only for suggestions for certain events or characters rather than twisting the story to others' liking. AND I WOULD BE GLAD IF HE BE KIND ENOUGH TO POST THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY, IT'S ALMOST A YEAR!

8/21/23, 2:34 AM
@NO Hello, pal. Thank you very much for your comment, I really appreciate it. I take note of all the comments exactly as you say, consider them and using them to enrich the story (that have happened, some of you have made some delicios suggestions), but keeping the plot loyal to how I envisioned it. Speaking of which, that's been a problem with the next chapter. In order to move the plot forward, I need to explain some of Chuy's backstory, because it will make sense of what's gonna happen to Terry, and by extension Kyle, David and even to John Stewart when he enters the story. The problem is that the backstory was too long, which slowed down the main plot. So I've been struggling to get it to work, to reshape it or to compress it. At one point I was thinking of turning it into a standalone short story for Gay Cupid Stories. I've done a lot of cutting, reshaping, and editing on that part, and I think I'm finally getting it to work. I know it's taken a long time, but it's been really difficult to me. I caused me a block, to the point that I made the decision to work on a short story for last month's challenge based on an old idea i had long ago, in order to clear my mind a bit and get some mental clearness. I'm confident that I will be able to solve that big problem soon to continue. Believe me, I really want to go ahead with Kyle's missadventures. it's frustrating that a lot of chapter 15 and 16 are already written and working fine, but I can't finish them or upload them if I haven't finished chapter 14 first. I hope there won't be too many more delays on it now that I'm solving the big problem on it.
8/21/23, 2:16 AM
Fuckin' bravo, man. Brilliant work.
8/21/23, 1:50 AM
The corruption continues and steps up a notch. Another great chapter! I'm eager to see what happens to Ian now that his prude of a boyfriend is happier as a filthy slut.
Lampshade15
8/21/23, 12:13 AM
Probably the hottest chapter in this series yet!
John
8/20/23, 10:28 PM
These boys gonna get hairy?
8/20/23, 9:52 PM
This series is hot! Can't wait to see what he turns Ian into.
8/20/23, 9:47 PM
Super histoire, je suis impatient de lire la suite !
8/18/23, 10:10 PM
I fucking knew Jamal was lying and keeping Travis a girl on purpose!! As hot as he is, he is an ass hat. However this chapter was really wholesome in its own way and I really like the Travis/Kingston shipping that is starting to happen. I'm very curious to see where this is heading. Hopefully it will include some physical proximity between Travis and Kingston at the gym.

8/20/23, 7:11 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Maybe Jamal just isn't telling the whole truth. Maybe he's helping a himbo find himself... but don't worry, it's not finished yet