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Anonymous
8/19/23, 4:38 AM
I was hoping Jamal would fuck Travis. Was really looking forward to it. Especially with how you write! But it’s still insanely hot. Loving where it’s going.

8/20/23, 7:09 PM
@Anonymous Thanks. Don't worry, the story isn't finished..
8/18/23, 2:08 PM
I have to say, I'm LOVING this story so far. And from this chapter if it just so happens that, after EVERYTHING you've got planned, it turns into some kind of Travis/ Kingston romance, I wouldn't be mad! :joy:

8/20/23, 7:08 PM
@[Dumb Horny Jock](/user/show/10005925) Hey thanks - I remember the stories you used to write, they were so hot too... I won't spoil anything for you, but I promise you'll get hard in all the right ways
8/20/23, 6:22 PM
Ready for more adventures with Brick and Donnie. Great work so far @ventage
8/20/23, 6:16 PM
OMG, chapters are keep getting hotter. I really love the police daddy aspect. Them being protective to their babies. So hot. And love the detail Gabriel didnt really cured Alex and Greg. Since they are the cause of this problems, they are the original sinners. It is also hot that Luke got infected but still aware of his infection and thus infecting John and making him dumb. Love the bunny chase. Cant wait for the finale. Still not sure who i am rooting for, the Sinners or the Saint. But i for one wants Gabriel and Ryan be together and have a wild, sexy and hot fuck.
8/20/23, 3:19 PM
So glad you posted this! One of my favorite stories
Martin
8/20/23, 2:37 PM
That's ***so*** intense. Really frightening so. I was afraid that you wouldn't be able to continue this series, as you've written that you need some time off, so I'm very happy to see this chapter. And it was one of your best yet.

8/20/23, 2:49 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you kindly! I’m very glad you’re enjoying. I was very stressed a few weeks ago. I still am honestly, but I’m doing a lot better and writing isa great outlet. University doesn’t start yet for me (might sound famillar, lol) and when it does, I have no idea how stuff will be. I do want to carry on with this story and do plan to, but things keep happening, haha. For now, this story is still happening, just don’t expect weekly chapters.
8/20/23, 1:57 PM
What a hot story!!! Hope there's more parts soon!
8/20/23, 1:55 PM
I love a good erotic hypno stage story! Can't wait for part two!!!
8/20/23, 1:36 PM
Please, please, please continue this.
8/20/23, 1:15 PM
Always love a stage hypno story but yes, this was well written and loved just how x rated it got!