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Anonymous
8/20/23, 4:28 AM
That is so hot. I love how Thomas slowly loses himself.
8/20/23, 3:50 AM
More from my favorite author. I love them all, but Sammy chapters are my favorites. Thanks!
8/19/23, 10:22 PM
Its sexy to read about pompous snobs being taken down a few notches. If there is a sequel, I do hope Rich finds it in his heart as an alpha top to not completely destroy Quentin's and Seamus's college education. Those two werent that mean to Rich. Maybe they can be made to accomodate Rich's academic failings and in return they get to bitch out on Master Rich's endowment. Quite a nice symbiotic relationship. Very hot story. Thank you for the orgasm!

8/20/23, 3:50 AM
@[Horologio](/user/show/939806) I'm glad you enjoyed the story, thank you for your comment! And we'll see what happens if there ends up being a sequel... šŸ˜‰
8/20/23, 3:26 AM
I have enjoyed this series very much so far, but I fear where it's heading with how you left it off. Bear in mind, the following is my personal preference and I would much rather you write what feels right to you, I just want to voice my opinion. I would really like to see Tom and Fred use the MindX together. That could be extremely cute and sexy. Or, if you go for the betrayal route and have Tom turn on Fred, I would like to see Fred regain control over Tom in the end. I just think Fred deserves to have the control after everything, especially if you go with the betrayal route. I just really wanted to put the option out there and my reasoning behind it in case you were considering it, because all of these people really did hurt Fred and if Tom does too by betrayal, then Fred deserves to regain that power over him. Again, that is just my preference. This is your story, and regardless of what your readers want, you should write this story however you feel is right, because at the end of the day, it comes back to if you're proud of what you're putting out there.
8/20/23, 3:06 AM
Oh wow what a rollercoaster of a chapter. Theres bit of darkness, vulnerability and lightness from Fred. Hot sex scenes, but i especially like the Security Guards. And im pleased they are rooting for Fred and Tom. Im glad that Tom is single AND also have feelings toward Fred. I kinda forsee that Tom might ask some demonstration of MindX. Love that this couple is playing amd mind controlling together next chapter. Cant wait. And i like the previous commenter, i understand why where the darkness of Fred coming from and im happy that Tom finally shown to him the light and hopefully happiness.
8/20/23, 1:58 AM
I’m loving all of these. Nipples are a huge kink!
8/20/23, 12:46 AM
Edlam still waiting for the continuation of this beautiful story. :heart_eyes:. When?
Anonymous
8/20/23, 12:22 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading them! Cheers.
8/19/23, 10:15 PM
An interesting thing to note is I couldn't find any prior stories by ThatLook where the originating evil doesn't win, which would point to Eddie success. Having said that, the author could well have decided that this will be a novel creative direction, in which case Matt wins (and maybe becomes the greater evil).

Anonymous
8/19/23, 10:41 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) May the greatest evil win! :rofl: Matt still has a lot of catching up to do if he wants to take the crown, though...
Anonymous
8/19/23, 9:58 PM
I have to say, watching Matt slowly become corrupted while rationalizing everything to himself is pretty fun, better than I expected. I think I could even get behind the idea of Matt "winning" in the end by becoming an even bigger monster than Eddie. That being said, I like the direction anarchomegalomaniac and Redcoma are going in. It *is* pretty suspicious that Eddie has taunted Matt about going to the library multiple times, but supposedly hasn't been using Mr. Fadden to spy on him. Has he really gotten that sloppy, or is it a hint toward a bigger, more devious scheme?