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Anonymous
8/20/23, 12:22 AM
Excellent. I look forward to reading them! Cheers.
8/19/23, 10:15 PM
An interesting thing to note is I couldn't find any prior stories by ThatLook where the originating evil doesn't win, which would point to Eddie success. Having said that, the author could well have decided that this will be a novel creative direction, in which case Matt wins (and maybe becomes the greater evil).

Anonymous
8/19/23, 10:41 PM
@[anarchomegalomaniac](/user/show/907794) May the greatest evil win! :rofl: Matt still has a lot of catching up to do if he wants to take the crown, though...
Anonymous
8/19/23, 9:58 PM
I have to say, watching Matt slowly become corrupted while rationalizing everything to himself is pretty fun, better than I expected. I think I could even get behind the idea of Matt "winning" in the end by becoming an even bigger monster than Eddie. That being said, I like the direction anarchomegalomaniac and Redcoma are going in. It *is* pretty suspicious that Eddie has taunted Matt about going to the library multiple times, but supposedly hasn't been using Mr. Fadden to spy on him. Has he really gotten that sloppy, or is it a hint toward a bigger, more devious scheme?
8/19/23, 9:12 PM
I kinda want Eddie to have Matt think he won. But in fact it was Eddie that won & Matt became his top slave. By that I mean Matt helps Eddie more slaves.
8/19/23, 7:59 PM
Absolutely loved this new chapter! So much detail and so good!
8/19/23, 7:07 PM
Amazing
8/19/23, 6:15 PM
hottttt
Zander
8/19/23, 5:01 PM
Can't wait to see the look of shock on Eddie's face as Matt controls him)
8/19/23, 4:48 PM
Loved this new chapter, excited to see what’s going on with Carson! Also love all the smaller details, stripping the frat guys, using Beau like a big human dildo, etc. extremely cool stuff
8/19/23, 4:40 PM
So so glad to see another chapter of this!! One of my favourite stories on this site, really amazing work!