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8/17/23, 2:23 PM
Great story! Hope you are planning to keep it going!
8/17/23, 1:39 PM
One of the hottest stories I’ve ever read
Anonymous
8/17/23, 1:08 PM
Love where the story is going, can’t wait to where it leads….
Anonymous
8/17/23, 3:07 AM
So you're telling me the one unaccounted-for hero is known for his sleight of hand and disguises, yet no one thought to check whether the "evil mastermind" they apprehended was the real deal and not just another brainwashed lackey? I think I'm with the General here, these sheeple deserve whatever's cumming to them! Excited to see what "Mr. Dewar" has in store now that there are no pesky do-gooders to get in his way...

8/17/23, 11:48 AM
@Anonymous Whaaaat,...? Noo,... no, no! Nothing fishy here! I have documents to _prove_ The Subduer is behind bars! Now, move along!
8/17/23, 11:33 AM
Perfectly awesome. Love this. More more more please!
Anonymous
8/17/23, 2:43 AM
I thought you've abandoned this series, but I'm so glad you returned! And damn, this was hot! Looking forward to more appearances by these two!

8/17/23, 9:56 AM
@Anonymous Thank you! For sure they'll appear in more chapters!
offeringservice26
8/17/23, 6:47 AM
Fucking hot! Loved the return of the lidocaine! Discovered a new fetish after reading your no reciprocation story (many many times lol)
8/17/23, 12:24 AM
Oh, so it is a bittersweet ending. Subduer is "defeated" but not actually. That is why im confused halfway reading at how is Subduer is defeated so easily. It was part of his grand scheme. Im not sure about the ending since i am mostly the kind of person who doesn't want the "bad guy" to win. Anyway, it is an excellent story and enjoyed reading it.

8/17/23, 12:34 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Ending? Oh,... not quite :) One more stop along the way,... although I can't promise the ending will be any kinder,...

8/17/23, 12:42 AM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Yeah basing it with what happend between Feather and Seb, the ending wont be kinder. Since theres still Farsight not accounterd for right? Like what happened to him when Subduer combined him with that guy, whatever his name. Im pretty sure that is one of the storylines need to be tied. Anyway, cant wait to read it still even though its not gonna be a "good" ending.
8/17/23, 12:02 AM
Damn, this was hot. I've always had a soft, uh, I mean hard spot for narcissistic guys getting off on their own bodies in the mirror.
8/15/23, 8:13 PM
Ohhh, my GOD! I took my time to read it twice carefully, and I must say it was a succulent experience. The whole story is great, but I must say this last chapter is undoubtly the best of the whole series, probabbly because of the slow pace building you made on Gold Force (something that I particulary enjoy). The change on him was fantastic. Prior to reading this, my favourite character was Cock-Bot, but now he and Gold Toy are both my favourites! My, my, what a rush! The moments with the Cum-cow song, the Plaything song and the defilement of Gold Toy's costume with the marker pen are highlights for me (I think it would had been fun to see him turning into a criminal, but not as a something as special as a supervillain, but a petty criminal, still in his ruined costume, but that's just me, it's justa personal comment and not a criticism). But above all, the moment when Gold Force is too mindfucked to speak clearly and just babbles “Cughm-couhw! Cughm-couhw! Mmndrls, brbrrnls Cughm-couhw!” put me on the edge. Extra points for the "bad writing", it's a good detail that adds extra spice to the dumbing down process. Man, I LOVE IT!! What an awesome story! :sparkling_heart: :100: :thumbsup: :fire: :fire: :fire: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2:

8/15/23, 9:46 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It really means a lot to hear you pick out some of my favorite parts of writing this chapter. There's one chapter left to go (just 'the aftermath', but I failed to fit everything I wanted to into this last main chapter), so I hope you enjoy what is still to come!

8/16/23, 7:06 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) YAY! :star_struck: Awesome, can't wait to read it!!!

8/16/23, 8:58 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) :3