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Jul 30, 2023
8/17/23, 8:56 PM
Damn! Ended way too soon but its hot as hell, looking forward to the cumflation and feminization that this was tagged with.
8/16/23, 2:33 AM
I was rereading this and I noted Dominic looking at the trophy shelf at the beginning. This got me thinking… is Dominic manipulating Connor to get him to beg to become a condom? I also love Ya Boi Nix’s idea of reusing condoms. That’d be a thrill.

8/16/23, 9:31 PM
@[KinkyNickInSea](/user/show/17305) No, Dominic is looking to the shelf, specifically because Connor calls out his previous boyfriends by saying "I bet you say that to all of them." Which is a bit of foreshadowing that Dominic's boyfriends _are_ actually on that shelf.

8/17/23, 8:44 PM
@[Cockatrice](/user/show/620105) Ahh good point. My reading comprehension at 2:30 am isn't always great following things over paragraph breaks.. lol. Still its a wonderful story, a very well written description of the transformation. Thank you again for writing it.
Harlyrocket3069
8/17/23, 7:59 PM
Really hoping for a happy ending for Kyle I want him to beat the bad guys but still be changed by the experience.hoping he gets the best of both his old and new self
8/17/23, 7:55 PM
Holy shit, Twan. I didn't think I'd say this, but this is hotter than the first part. I absolutely adore the smothering caring of these jocks, and how they're playing off each other. It's breathtaking.
JR
8/17/23, 6:41 PM
Hot stuff! Hope we can see the dad and Greg as both top and bottom :smiling_imp:
Harlyrocket3069
8/17/23, 5:52 PM
I'm a sucker for bitter sweet happy endings.it would be cool if he does get saved by his friend and maybe with help from another hero and they start trying to repair him but he still keeps snapping in and out of it and starts getting horny over his friend.in the end he's mostly fixed but whenever he smells pits or anything to do with what happens he runs to his friend and convinces him to help him indulge.
8/17/23, 5:22 PM
It continues to be a beautiful story, and yes, that's a good thing.
8/17/23, 5:03 PM
Love it so much, the perspective of the father was marvelous and how his thoughts changed after the brainwashing. Soon Grandpa Ken will be next!
8/17/23, 3:55 PM
I wonder how I miss this story when it was posted D: but at least I found it now :3 I love it and the best, I don't need to wait for part 2 sonce is already posted <3 💙💙💙💙
8/17/23, 2:40 PM
Maybe it isn't tailored for the genre, but man. I'm so glad I can read it here. It's beautiful. But yes, I grew up during the AIDS crisis, so it's very very hard to read about it these days. Especially since so many shows like Pose center around it.

CasualWanderer82
8/17/23, 3:31 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for your comment. I wouldn't say themes like these aren't tailored to the genre. But I have realized my work isn't tailored for the general audience of these sites. I was happy to share, regardless.

Martin
8/17/23, 3:37 PM
@[CasualWanderer82](/user/show/10035964) I would like to disagree. Your stories are standing out, but in a positive way. I want to broaden the scope, away from pure mind control fiction to general erotic stories, and what you’ve written is simply spectacular. Both regarding the stories themselves as well es the erotic parts.

CasualWanderer82
8/17/23, 3:45 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you 😊