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8/16/23, 6:01 PM
hot hot hot ... more please!
ano
8/16/23, 5:14 PM
Hopefully we will get the next part sometimes in the future; so so looking forward for the finale
Anonymous
8/16/23, 1:04 PM
Awww, happy ending. Well... Not so happy but it still a good ending. I wonder what Subduer plan for General.

8/16/23, 1:25 PM
@Anonymous There's still an aftermath still to come; no new curveballs, but just rounding things off and tying up loose ends that I had to push back from this chapter (which was supposed to be the end). I hope you enjoy :3
8/16/23, 1:02 PM
i read it again... This was just fantastic!
8/15/23, 3:18 PM
This was such a damn fun set of stories, thank you for writing it!

8/16/23, 8:25 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) And thank you for reading it!
8/15/23, 2:29 PM
Simon's kind of a jerk, but he's using it for the best of causes -- defending his loved sister! Hee. Man. Loving how much these guys get into their debasement and become wanton despite their resistance.

8/16/23, 8:24 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Of course, it's all for the defence of his sister, perfectly understandable really. Frankly they should have seen it coming. And thank you, glad you've enjoyed!
Sep 27, 2007
Jess
8/16/23, 7:15 AM
Your story was complex and involving. As I read it with a growing sense of interest your writing connected me to your ideas as the story moved along. I thought you did an exceptional job of creating an alien landscape and it was at the end of the story that it occurred to me, how marvelous that there was such a sense of movement and interaction which you created through the description of an immovable protagonist. I was startled by that realization.
8/16/23, 6:13 AM
I thought this was a great piece of writing Where can I download this App, I would love to live in this world
8/16/23, 2:43 AM

Martin
8/16/23, 5:07 AM
@[Mudj](/user/show/10029002) Are you implying that something happened to the author Max Potter?
8/16/23, 4:40 AM
Part 2 please?