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8/15/23, 1:40 PM
just FUN! WOW. Go get em FRED!

8/16/23, 2:15 AM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) haha thanks for that! And yes, go Fred!
8/15/23, 7:48 AM
I feel like, if Berry belongs to the whole team, this should be building to an orgy in which the entire team uses Berry as their cumslut. Complete obedience and service to his teammates and their sexual needs. Just a thought.

8/15/23, 8:56 PM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) I see where you're coming from and if someone wrote that it would likely be hot but just not where I'm heading with this. As referenced in the first part most of the gymnast don't need the oil and orgasms, just the cream and white noise is enough, so they aren't under the same level of control.
Malemann54
8/15/23, 7:48 PM
I was wondering about your use of the term "my dear". Are you British? An American man would never address another male a "my dear" unless they were in an intimate relationship.

8/15/23, 8:28 PM
@[Malemann54](/user/show/701473) Hello! To be honest, English is not my native language, so I had to lern it from zero and I learnt from British people. So, "dear" was the word I thought was more close to my native language word associated to the idea that I wanted. Thanks for the comment, I really had any idea of this context. I'll search for another word that fits better. 😉
8/15/23, 5:22 PM
You possess a rare talent. That of storytelling. This story is of a rare eroticism. It's so fluid and steamy that it has all the qualities of cinematography. You don't read a story, you literally live it. Thank you very much for continuing the story!!
CHAVCHEF
8/15/23, 2:43 PM
Nice Horny Story
8/15/23, 3:54 AM
Ngl, this is very hot. Fred unleashing his darker side is kind of hot. But i feel like someone needs to show him the light on his very dark but sexy tunnel. Cant wait what comes next. Ps. Good thing he made them to be nicer to the office staff. Thats one positive thing came out of this situation.

benedick543
8/15/23, 1:50 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thanks again for your feedback! And wow, I love how invested you are in Fred's redemption arc lol I think you'll like what I've cooked up for the next chapter :) Oh, and yeah, I believe that despite Fred's twisted commands and the dark turn he has taken, he's still a good guy at heart, so he still tries to pepper in some positive changes toward his subjects (same with the office bullies in the previous chapter). I'd like to think that this was something Mark influenced him with during their demo session at the cafe (in my previous story, The "Totally Normal" Café), as Fred seemed fascinated by the positive long-term effects made possible by MindX :)
8/15/23, 11:47 AM
I liked this but I wish the ending wasn’t so rushed. I would’ve liked to have seen Simon and Thomas have sex, as well as see the Thomas persona overtake the Tommy one.
8/15/23, 10:12 AM
This is so beautifully written! I mean, yes it's erotic too, but I'd wager there's not an unnecessary word in this piece. It flows so lovingly. I'm in awe.
8/15/23, 9:37 AM
Amazing and hypnotic. Can see a story series forming
8/15/23, 8:40 AM
I would love to see a slaves fight of Matt and Eddie's ones hahaha