Recent Comments

8/15/23, 8:13 PM
Ohhh, my GOD! I took my time to read it twice carefully, and I must say it was a succulent experience. The whole story is great, but I must say this last chapter is undoubtly the best of the whole series, probabbly because of the slow pace building you made on Gold Force (something that I particulary enjoy). The change on him was fantastic. Prior to reading this, my favourite character was Cock-Bot, but now he and Gold Toy are both my favourites! My, my, what a rush! The moments with the Cum-cow song, the Plaything song and the defilement of Gold Toy's costume with the marker pen are highlights for me (I think it would had been fun to see him turning into a criminal, but not as a something as special as a supervillain, but a petty criminal, still in his ruined costume, but that's just me, it's justa personal comment and not a criticism). But above all, the moment when Gold Force is too mindfucked to speak clearly and just babbles “Cughm-couhw! Cughm-couhw! Mmndrls, brbrrnls Cughm-couhw!” put me on the edge. Extra points for the "bad writing", it's a good detail that adds extra spice to the dumbing down process. Man, I LOVE IT!! What an awesome story! :sparkling_heart: :100: :thumbsup: :fire: :fire: :fire: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2: :star2:

8/15/23, 9:46 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It really means a lot to hear you pick out some of my favorite parts of writing this chapter. There's one chapter left to go (just 'the aftermath', but I failed to fit everything I wanted to into this last main chapter), so I hope you enjoy what is still to come!

8/16/23, 7:06 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) YAY! :star_struck: Awesome, can't wait to read it!!!

8/16/23, 8:58 PM
@[Plymouth58](/user/show/1353762) :3
8/16/23, 7:21 PM
Great story! The POV controller aspect was great, as was the fingering and the magics. I wish the older brother was the one to rim the younger brother, that and actually fuck him, but the fingering was hot. I hope things end well for the group but the set up and nature of this chapter was hot. Fun stuff!
8/16/23, 4:05 AM
This seems hot but I kinda wish the magic rule had been more consistent. I thought the characters would turn into whatever they say Ethan was, and Ethan would turn into whatever he said others were, but sometimes Ethan would say something and receive no change at all

8/16/23, 7:12 PM
@[Zi19](/user/show/922060) Thanks, I'll have another read through and check for inconsistencies (thought I had but always happy to be corrected :) )
8/16/23, 6:14 PM
How did I miss this story? Damn that got me hard. Is our new devil under Oscar's control? Is Oscar a demon taking on human form to grow his power and control over men? Is he tasked with finding human hosts for trapped demon spirits? Is this an accident and the first possessed rubber suit Oscar has made? Will our new devil reward Oacar by planting his demonic seed in Oscar's ass? I'm throbbing as my desires for a second chapter overwhelm me.
8/16/23, 6:01 PM
hot hot hot ... more please!
ano
8/16/23, 5:14 PM
Hopefully we will get the next part sometimes in the future; so so looking forward for the finale
Anonymous
8/16/23, 1:04 PM
Awww, happy ending. Well... Not so happy but it still a good ending. I wonder what Subduer plan for General.

8/16/23, 1:25 PM
@Anonymous There's still an aftermath still to come; no new curveballs, but just rounding things off and tying up loose ends that I had to push back from this chapter (which was supposed to be the end). I hope you enjoy :3
8/16/23, 1:02 PM
i read it again... This was just fantastic!
8/15/23, 3:18 PM
This was such a damn fun set of stories, thank you for writing it!

8/16/23, 8:25 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) And thank you for reading it!
8/15/23, 2:29 PM
Simon's kind of a jerk, but he's using it for the best of causes -- defending his loved sister! Hee. Man. Loving how much these guys get into their debasement and become wanton despite their resistance.

8/16/23, 8:24 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Of course, it's all for the defence of his sister, perfectly understandable really. Frankly they should have seen it coming. And thank you, glad you've enjoyed!