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7/19/25, 8:27 AM
Absolutely hot and best wanking material
7/19/25, 8:22 AM
Loved it!
7/19/25, 7:52 AM
This story is so damned hot and wakes up hidden desires. I could die for such an app
7/19/25, 7:14 AM
Honestly, Jason is a dick and Ryan would be better off with Drew even with his claims to be straight; HE actually cares about Ryan. Jason is a narcissist and only uses Ryan to make himself feel better by controlling him. I actually hope you have a chapter coming with Drew telling Jason to go fuck himself, but it would be even better if Ryan finally stood up to Jason himself. Sorry for the rant, but I lived with a narcissist for two years, so I know the pattern. Lucky for me, we weren't a couple, just roommates, but that was enough

7/19/25, 7:27 AM
@[KnightStone](/user/show/1475633) I completely agree with you. Almost every single reader of mine dislikes Jason, and I intended it that way to highlight the closeness between Drew and Ryan. While the next chapter does not include a moment where Drew directly calls out Jason, the events that unfold in the following two parts will serve as a clear "fuck you" to Jason.
7/19/25, 5:58 AM
Hot stuff. I'm always glad to see new additions to the Hypnothrill literary universe. You gave a good sense of a slow takeover of the guys around town but it would have been great to get some more details of the process itself. Either way i'm looking forward to finding out what the boss has in store for the rest of them men. Hopefully it involves a lot more uncut pierced skinhead cock, bruv! Oi! Oi! Oi!
7/19/25, 3:47 AM
His next truth should be “I hate clothes”. After getting annoyed with how his dick doesn’t fit into pants or something. Followed up by bigger muscles to help carry his huge member.
Anonymous
7/19/25, 2:09 AM
I agree!!!
7/19/25, 12:43 AM
Hello, there! I hope you continue with this story, this instroduction was quite hot, and I'd love to read a follow up. Best regards!
7/19/25, 12:42 AM
Hi! Do you plan to continue this story? It's excellent! I'm hooked to it!
Boomer
9/24/23, 12:47 AM
The story was very good but the AI art at the end spoiled it to be honest.

9/24/23, 2:44 AM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) It's not for everyone, I'm glad you still enjoyed the writing. I'm healing from a serious injury in my right hand and with my design background; making a design helps me conceive the stories, I might update it to be some better art whenever I can!

7/18/25, 10:02 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) A lot of people seem to dislike AI art simply because they prefer something more traditional. i happen to like a whole lot of AI artwork, and that includes your representation of Dr. Bertram and Jimmy. True, the detail isn't sufficient to look like a photograph, but for my imagination they were perfect! Master looks beautiful, impeccable, and intelligent. His eyes, the window into his soul, show him to be cool, thoughtful, and very focused and attentive to whoever he is looking at. His kindness becomes apparent from his conversation, but his eyes while attentive also give us a vague unsubstantiated glimpse into his predatory nature. Jimmy looks the perfectly cute hot slender Asian boy who is naturally submissive and has learned to be attentive and sophisticated. I love both representations!