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Zander
4/5/25, 12:54 PM
Hot but stupid. He could have refused and told the media that he was being harassed and that they tried to put a chastity cage on him. A plot hole in many erotic stories.

4/5/25, 2:13 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) he has no proof, and no one would cooberate it and then he gets sued into oblivion. Also, he literally said he had no other offers so it was either this or nothing - what would going to the media get him? It doesn't get him a fully paid scholarship that would hopefully get him a future, either into the NFL or at least a degree. And although he thinks it sucks, he also thinks this is going to put 25 pounds of muscle mass on him, something that will make his future prospects better.

Zander
4/5/25, 2:37 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) Evidence can be obtained. And the fact that not a single white quarterback left this college as an athlete and they all disappeared does not seem suspicious to the police? Giving a chastity device to a student does not seem suspicious? A chastity device will help improve the figure like supplements? What nonsense. That's why I say that he could contact the police or the media to close this "college" and arrest the coach for harassment. Not counting the racism in the club, where everyone is black and one white person is harassed? There are too many Red Flags here. That's why I write that there is almost no logic in the story, if such an institution were in reality, such an institution would be closed and everyone would be arrested and brought to trial. And you still argue with me on the issue where you cannot prove that if this were a logically constructed world like ours, then such actions in the institution towards a student would lead to collapse. But of course it won't happen, because I understand that it's just an erotic story without logic and meaning for jerking off) that's all. And the funniest thing is that not a single institution gave a scholarship to our main character of the story. And I would like to know why? Is it because the main character is a fool and couldn't improve his academic performance or there were simply no places? And the funniest thing is that the main character really is a fool, since he agreed to put on the Chastity device) 🤣 it looked very funny and made the character stupid. It's good that at least he doubted 🤣. I have a theory why such an institution exists in this world: I think not only this institution is dependent on the BBC, but also the government and other government services, since such an institution exists and was not covered by the FBI and CIA. So this is a distinctive feature of this world (without logic).🤔

4/5/25, 2:55 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) lol of course real world logic doesn't apply to this world - this a chastity/cock shrink story - where does cock shrink fit in real world logic? But "disappeared into obscurity" isn't the same as just "disappeared", the police wouldn't be looking for them, they're not missing. Why was this the only institution that gave him a scholarship? Because he's a pretty white boy they want to use. He literally said he has no other skills other than football, so he's not getting in on academic skill anywhere :satisfied:

Zander
4/5/25, 3:11 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) I wrote about this above and you just agreed with it. I don’t know what exactly you didn’t like about what I wrote above. But this doesn’t change the fact that the story is weak in terms of plot and logic. I know erotic stories even on this site where, logically, the actions happen much better and are written more well and interestingly than the logic of this story. I’m not against your story, understand that already.) I just commented that it is weak in terms of plot and logical narration. I also understand you that this is necessary for the plot in the future so that you can explain some things and actions that will happen to the character and his body in the following chapters (that’s why you need to remove such an understanding as Logic and Realism), because without this you won’t be able to explain the things happening in your story. But you just do it clumsily and quickly) I know writers who also have to do this for stories, but they do it much more skillfully, explaining all the actions of the characters and the logic of this world. Unfortunately, you just don’t have this yet (.

4/5/25, 3:26 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) oh dear. So the issue here is your inability to read between the lines, you literally need everything laid out for you explicitly or you don't get it. I'm just taking a wild stab and guessing you're a product of the US education system?

Zander
4/5/25, 3:40 PM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) No, thank God. I'm not from the US, I can read between the lines) but you didn't understand what I wrote and meant. I think there's no point in arguing or writing to you any further. I'll stick to my guns and you stick to yours.

4/15/25, 7:12 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) You think this is unrealistic because it would get reported in the real world? Do you realize how low reporting rates of sexual harassment actually are, particularly male on male harassment? Actual r*pe reports are low in the real world let alone harassment and you think harassment would immediately be reported in the real world? I'm not sure what "real world" you live in, but it's not Earth.

Zander
4/15/25, 8:15 AM
@[Stormm](/user/show/10058905) What does this have to do with it? This is a story about something else and you are mixing it with cases of rape in the real world? This is a completely different topic and if you want to talk about it, you need to write it on another resource and not here. And if you did not know, rape is mainly suffered by little boys, but not adult men who have formed an imagination and personality, not to mention physical strength. In this story, the main character is not a little child who cannot resist the coach and others who harass him, but an adult man who can stand up for himself. And this is the author's fictional world where the laws of physics and reality work differently. 🤷 If you take this seriously, then you need to reconsider your realities in life and most likely, you do not live on Earth, but in your imaginary world of Neverland.

Zander
4/15/25, 8:16 AM
@[Stormm](/user/show/10058905) I think our dispute is closed?

4/15/25, 8:49 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) "That’s why I say that he could contact the police or the media to close this “college” and arrest the coach for harassment" - your quote. You are the one that tried to say this is stupid because it would never happen in the real world, when most cases of harassment in the real world don't get reported, but go off I guess. As for rape stats - around 5-10% of adult men (not kids) report having being rape, most of those unreported to police, and its widely believed by researchers that the 10% itself is vastly underreported. And if you did not know (and you clearly don't) male on male rape is vastly unreported exactly for the reasons you think it doesn't happen - that grown men are expected to be able to "man up" and stand up for themselves and defend themselves.

4/15/25, 8:52 AM
@[Stormm](/user/show/10058905) @zander This dispute is done. Just enjoy the story.

Zander
4/15/25, 9:12 AM
@[Aramane](/user/show/10041848) That's what I do) they wrote to me and I responded)

Anonymous
5/10/25, 9:31 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) get a life
Zander
5/2/25, 10:01 AM
I hope there will be a continuation of this story and very soon. Is it possible to read this story somewhere else? I am really looking forward to the interaction of Zulu with the Emperor (how he turns him into a whore) and in the end with Takeo.

5/10/25, 10:14 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Yes there will be ! Maybe you can try on telemachus12 website !? Stories posted there too !

Zander
5/10/25, 10:25 AM
@[Gaeten5588](/user/show/10014337) Thank you very much for the tip. I saw that the release dates of the chapters are indicated there)
5/10/25, 12:22 PM
WOW! This was just the most fun EVER. Logan's pit at the end... OMGosh. Ill never get over this story.

5/11/25, 5:06 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Much appreciated!
5/10/25, 1:19 PM
this is amazing, more? and hopefully longer haha

5/11/25, 12:56 PM
@[jacobmitenko](/user/show/13891) will definitely consider, thanks for reading!!
5/10/25, 1:47 PM
Thanks! More to cum
5/10/25, 2:31 PM
Very hot concept!
Muscle-Flex
5/10/25, 3:46 PM
Great job with character and dialog! I got attached to Pig and Tyler and Nick. The mix of hot studs, arousing sexual exploration, humor, and plausible reality is well done as is the evolving storyline of sexual attraction and power dynamics (if I'm reading into it correctly.)
Gay Harem
3/13/23, 9:44 AM
Thank you for participating :blush: I've assigned you rewards~

Anonymous
5/10/25, 4:04 PM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Is this how you worship priapus, the penis. Do i suck on a dick really good mean i am worshipping right
Muscle-Flex
5/10/25, 4:17 PM
There is a bit of a psychological thriller aspect to this story. We know Liam is handsome and well-built from all the time he puts in at the gym. He knows it too as he easily attracts people's attention. But there seems to be streak of insecurity or passiveness in his personality that causes problems in his life. Why doesn't he have friends? The gaslighting aspect is interesting. It's not simply all in Liam's head. The text messages from Noah shows us a game is afoot. It's going to be fun to see what that game is and what the stakes are.

lukas pucci
5/10/25, 5:24 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Damn, dude—was not expecting such a deep read and you’re spot on. Liam’s definitely got that quiet confidence but yeah… there’s a lot he’s not dealing with. You nailed it about the passiveness too, that’s gonna keep coming back. And Noah? Let’s just say the game’s way deeper than it looks right now. Appreciate the thoughtful take, man—it’s exactly the kind of stuff that keeps me hyped to keep writing. Also, Chapter Three is just out hehe
5/10/25, 4:30 PM
I really liked this episode, and I'm really looking forward to this sequel. You could even make it into branches with different endings from the first part.