Recent Comments

8/13/23, 8:57 PM
Que bueno ver historias nuevas en español!
8/13/23, 4:14 PM
This is a great premise. As a story, it leaves me a little cold, because there are no actual characters. For me, it would be so much hotter if you showed the effects of the Voice app on society through the experiences of a few individual characters rather than just telling us about it from an impersonal remove.

Rub.berized
8/13/23, 8:55 PM
@[Hypnothrill](/user/show/37386) Maybe it's a good first part to introduce the scenario and then follow a few characters along their story. Thanks for the feedback.
8/13/23, 8:39 PM
I've been wanting to do a story where both sides (knowingly or unknowingly) transform each other at the same time, so I'm really glad to see you taking a stab at it. And glad to see you back to posting again. I'm looking forward to seeing what you come up with, and good luck.
8/13/23, 7:52 PM
Sooooooo happy to see a continuation of this
Nova
8/13/23, 7:27 PM
Love this ending. Bryant’s transformation was so well thought out and hit every button for me. The perfect buildup to Freddy’s desires. It’s sad to say goodbye to this series. Hopefully you do an epilogue of sorts and explore more of Bryant. I’m sure there’s a few other wishes that could be made. Maybe Bryant can try to make himself more alpha like getting hairy and musky. Even if there’s no more wishes, I still think seeing more of Bryant’s alpha body take control would be hot.
8/13/23, 6:32 PM
A true "punishment fits the crime" scenario. Package thieves have control of their 'packages' stolen.
Pecfan
8/13/23, 5:32 PM
I love that you are keeping up with the story. It’s great to see our knight forgetting about his former trip on the ship to become a pec-loving pirate. I just miss a bit more of pec action from the captain but keep the good work!
8/13/23, 4:57 PM
Can't wait to see the harem grow and have the boys interact with each other for the amusement of their master
Anonymous
8/13/23, 4:56 PM
Love the way you structured this chapter, with the fractured version of the induction. Leaves me wanting to put it back together and hear exactly what Eddie’s talking about…
SpeedoBoy
8/13/23, 4:38 PM
I’ll add my voice to the Matt succeeding team! I want him to succeed but become corrupted in the process.