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prettyrickifag@yahoo.com
8/11/23, 7:46 PM
Damn! So hot to be so pretty and sexy for a strong Black Man like Jamal!
Lavender Lad
8/11/23, 7:28 PM
The suicide and killing felt too abrupt tbh , not that I am totally opposed to the hypnotee dying in some way while under trance especially as it's kinda of a staple of kaa/vampire hypno stories and can be a sign that the person is so deeply controlled that it overpowers the instinict of self preservation, However I feel like it would have done alot better if you transitioned into it by showing axel trying to resist when he is first given the command or the captain attempting to put up a fight when he refuses to kneel longer than the others, wherein some more hypno patter could have been added or thunderpec toying with his victims before breaking them into complete obedience. This is still the first chapter though and any concept involving hypno pecs is hot af so I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
8/11/23, 6:49 PM
Ironically, while I agree that as with all Baralai's _fucking hot_ and wildly imaginative stories, the spelling and grammar issues are very distracting, "phone going off" is actually perfectly fine vernacular in this case :-)
8/11/23, 1:18 PM
i love this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

8/11/23, 5:39 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! More is planned out. I have at least 2 more chapters of Dan falling under the control of Zahir's powerful musk. Also working on an hypno-curse story.
8/11/23, 2:25 AM
This is series is perfection. I can’t wait to see Tank again. Did he make more himbo tops às himself?

8/11/23, 3:18 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you! And Tank is one of my favorites too. Next chapter does have “dumbing down” component, but it isn’t Tank related and is darker than his sweet himbo antics. Trying to think of a good way to bring Tank and others back that doesn’t feel too repetitive. I’m thinking about starting a separate series for scenes from campus that are just smut and not plot related.
8/11/23, 2:54 PM
Just keep making them bigger! Love this story!
Anonymous
8/11/23, 2:31 PM
I like the direction of where the story is going, just not sure about the wives(ex-wives) also being present in the scenes….. but other than that, really can’t wait for Part 3….
Martin
8/11/23, 1:45 PM
I've assigned your first story to your account (you had submitted it without using an account originally), and I've fixed the author name of the other two stories, I hope that's ok with you.
8/11/23, 12:38 PM
This has been a tremendous tale. The twists and turns are great. I have read this several times, and each time I pick up another clue. Thanks
spiralthiago
8/11/23, 11:14 AM
Exelent!!! Super hot twins