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8/12/23, 4:52 AM
Yeah, holy shit. This has turned into a grotesquerie. I was honestly so impressed before Javier. Now I want to warn people away from it.
8/12/23, 2:20 AM
Just such fantastic writing, and so slow-burn sexy.
8/12/23, 1:56 AM
This is excellently written and hits a lot of my erotic points. Thank you for posting it!
8/11/23, 10:12 PM
That is one hot class. Lucky students. Cant wait to read to what happened to Gabriel and the two cursed guys.
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8/11/23, 7:46 PM
Damn! So hot to be so pretty and sexy for a strong Black Man like Jamal!
Lavender Lad
8/11/23, 7:28 PM
The suicide and killing felt too abrupt tbh , not that I am totally opposed to the hypnotee dying in some way while under trance especially as it's kinda of a staple of kaa/vampire hypno stories and can be a sign that the person is so deeply controlled that it overpowers the instinict of self preservation, However I feel like it would have done alot better if you transitioned into it by showing axel trying to resist when he is first given the command or the captain attempting to put up a fight when he refuses to kneel longer than the others, wherein some more hypno patter could have been added or thunderpec toying with his victims before breaking them into complete obedience. This is still the first chapter though and any concept involving hypno pecs is hot af so I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.
8/11/23, 6:49 PM
Ironically, while I agree that as with all Baralai's _fucking hot_ and wildly imaginative stories, the spelling and grammar issues are very distracting, "phone going off" is actually perfectly fine vernacular in this case :-)
8/11/23, 1:18 PM
i love this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

8/11/23, 5:39 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! More is planned out. I have at least 2 more chapters of Dan falling under the control of Zahir's powerful musk. Also working on an hypno-curse story.
8/11/23, 2:25 AM
This is series is perfection. I can’t wait to see Tank again. Did he make more himbo tops às himself?

8/11/23, 3:18 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you! And Tank is one of my favorites too. Next chapter does have “dumbing down” component, but it isn’t Tank related and is darker than his sweet himbo antics. Trying to think of a good way to bring Tank and others back that doesn’t feel too repetitive. I’m thinking about starting a separate series for scenes from campus that are just smut and not plot related.
8/11/23, 2:54 PM
Just keep making them bigger! Love this story!