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8/11/23, 8:22 AM
Soooo incredibly hot, I can't wait to see what tye captain will make him do next
Anonymous
8/7/23, 2:12 PM
This story is really hot! I liked Travis' puppy personality and if someone like Jamal would've let his cock nonchalantly caress my cheeks I would just die of embarrassment, confusion and arosement. However, despite it being stated, Jamal doesn't look like a nice guy. I mean, Travis did absolutely nothing wrong, and probably could've been manipulated in a more positive way. That's not to say that this is a bad story, because it's not, I just feel bad for Travis. That in itself is some great writing as I didn't expect to sympathize with the white himbo who never faced a challenge. I hope Travis' spirit will be lifted soon, especially if it involves being lifted over Jamal's dick.

8/11/23, 6:45 AM
@Anonymous Thanks for the reply. And aargh... I tweaked the story a little to add in a bit more of Travis questioning himself, and Jamal getting a thrill by teasing and slightly humiliating Travis. But don't worry, they settle down quite nicely soon... but maybe not how people will expect
8/11/23, 5:26 AM
This was great. Look forward to part 2.
8/11/23, 5:20 AM
this is the 10,000,000th story!
8/11/23, 3:03 AM
I was gonna leave a comment on PLEASE write a part 2... And reading that there is one made me really happy.
ann
8/11/23, 1:05 AM
Love this! Please continue.
8/10/23, 10:04 AM
Superb! What a glorious chapter. The cunning ways of instilling envy in each of the two to-be-victims. Delicious. I loved the use of edging to 'torture' Blake into lust and wanting to get off, envious of gooner Gabe getting to shoot as much as he wanted. Jerking off in his own soul at his boyfriend's corruption is mightily hot too. I really enjoyed the way they were led to contribute to sullying themselves to be ready for the next demon. Gabe's already so far gone, it's only a matter of time. So excited for the next chapter!

8/10/23, 5:05 PM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks! I had a bit of writers block before the connection between envy and edging occurred to me. Glad it landed!

8/11/23, 12:38 AM
@[BateSeeker](/user/show/235651) Writers' block sucks but you nailed it with the solution. I never would have considered this and it is truly perfect. Both hot, because edging and that need growing really feeds into the corruption element. But tying in someone unrestricted able to enjoy orgasm after orgasm and cover themselves in jizz right in front of their tormented friend to elicit envy. Chef's kiss.
8/10/23, 8:55 PM
I wish Carolyn could have been a man that ends up serving master Milton in a sexual way too (maybe a threesome with the fiancé and dad?)
James
8/10/23, 7:24 PM
This was so hot!!!
Leo
8/10/23, 7:09 PM
Such a great start! You should make a chapter where we see the dad fall under his son’s control and the hot roleplay scene that happened in the bedroom! Also, please send the mom away. She’s not important. Have dad steal her ring and propose to his master, this will make their romantic relationship official.