Recent Comments

Leo
8/10/23, 7:09 PM
Such a great start! You should make a chapter where we see the dad fall under his son’s control and the hot roleplay scene that happened in the bedroom! Also, please send the mom away. She’s not important. Have dad steal her ring and propose to his master, this will make their romantic relationship official.
8/10/23, 6:01 PM
This is great. Love a twink transformation. Would love to see a sequel where you transform other actors into young twinks
8/10/23, 5:59 PM
Hoping this is continued! Awesome premise and writing!
8/10/23, 5:37 PM
Really loved this story and the tie-ins to fairy tales, though hoo boy the racial slurs were hard to get through.
Apr 12, 2023
NY
8/10/23, 5:37 PM
Can you write one of the chapters where he body swaps into a girl and then has a threesome with two inexperienced straight guys who are best friends? I want her to totally control everything that happens. She tells them that she won't do any sexual act with them unless they're also willing to do that thing to each other *first*. She makes them kiss each other before she kisses each of them. If one guy licks his friend's nipple, then she'll lick his nipple. If he grabs his friend's dick, then she'll grab his dick, etc... A good setting for this might be on a cruise ship, and these are two random guys by the pool.
Jax
8/10/23, 5:33 PM
100% agree. This just left me wanting more
Lampshade15
8/9/23, 1:20 PM
Another masterpiece! I love seeing how debauched these men become.

8/10/23, 5:05 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) Thank you!!
Gingcub
8/10/23, 3:47 PM
Love stories about guys being made into helpless gooners. Would love to see more of this
8/10/23, 12:09 PM
Gimp Gary sound like he was a low life but Tom wasn't. So at a certain point I expect Dylan, H and the others might get their due. As you Slaveboy good luck in your studies & don't stress out too much.

8/10/23, 3:36 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thank you, mate!!
8/10/23, 1:20 PM
Good story with a great premise but I felt some parts were rushed like the smoking bit as there were not many details given about that part of his transformation.