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8/10/23, 5:33 AM
Hot, too bad it was not happening for real on Onlyfans, to watch it.
8/10/23, 4:54 AM
Si hay adultos siendo esclavos de jovenes, me apunto
8/10/23, 2:26 AM
Great start……wondering where it goes?
8/9/23, 2:50 PM
Yeah, great imagery, great use of dominance, and I love that we're only getting a piece of what's happening to Jason, and can fill in how he's being controlled ourselves. I can't wait for more, is your plan to release during the weekends? I'd love to know when we'll get the next chapter...I crave it so! What I like from this chapter: I love how Marcos is using intimacy and physical contact to tease and dominate his roommate. The thong scene was amazing, I love that throughout the story, Jason doesn't really know or articulate what's happening to him...he's just experiencing it in real time, and feels dominated by his smaller roommate's powers. Can't wait to see what Marcos does to him next!

Gabator72
8/10/23, 1:55 AM
@[Enthralledo](/user/show/10022568) Hey my original plan was to translate and edit the whole story over the weekend, but somethings came up and I had to delay that. But I already submited the next chapters and I'm checking up the final ones. So you just have to wait until they get approve
8/10/23, 1:52 AM
I really hope you will continue the story soon :) really like it
Lavender Lad
8/10/23, 12:50 AM
I keep returning to this story every now and then cause it's so hot! Such a shame it never got continued
8/10/23, 12:35 AM
Very hot! Would love to see a continuation of this. Maybe Ry’s next big role
8/9/23, 11:55 PM
you are my new favorite.
8/9/23, 3:32 PM
Oh wow another interesting chapter so many twist and turns. Im bouncing back and forth if i should cheer for Subduer or hope for his downfall. I wonder what will happen next since its the other war around now. Subduer got Goldforce and Feather is now free. I wonder who will save the heroes or be the next victim. And i enjoyed Siege and feel bad that his plan to save Gold is foiled. Cant wait to read the next one.

8/9/23, 9:51 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Ha, yeah,... it's a tough one, and you aren't alone there! On the one hand, I want Feather and Gold to be okay and share their happiness together. On the other,.... well,... I'm sure The Subduer wants the same for them! All they'd have to do is submit,... I hope you enjoy what's to come ;)
Anonymous
8/9/23, 9:21 PM
love this story cant wait for more