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7/19/25, 8:22 AM
Loved it!
7/19/25, 7:52 AM
This story is so damned hot and wakes up hidden desires. I could die for such an app
7/19/25, 7:14 AM
Honestly, Jason is a dick and Ryan would be better off with Drew even with his claims to be straight; HE actually cares about Ryan. Jason is a narcissist and only uses Ryan to make himself feel better by controlling him. I actually hope you have a chapter coming with Drew telling Jason to go fuck himself, but it would be even better if Ryan finally stood up to Jason himself. Sorry for the rant, but I lived with a narcissist for two years, so I know the pattern. Lucky for me, we weren't a couple, just roommates, but that was enough

7/19/25, 7:27 AM
@[KnightStone](/user/show/1475633) I completely agree with you. Almost every single reader of mine dislikes Jason, and I intended it that way to highlight the closeness between Drew and Ryan. While the next chapter does not include a moment where Drew directly calls out Jason, the events that unfold in the following two parts will serve as a clear "fuck you" to Jason.
7/19/25, 5:58 AM
Hot stuff. I'm always glad to see new additions to the Hypnothrill literary universe. You gave a good sense of a slow takeover of the guys around town but it would have been great to get some more details of the process itself. Either way i'm looking forward to finding out what the boss has in store for the rest of them men. Hopefully it involves a lot more uncut pierced skinhead cock, bruv! Oi! Oi! Oi!
7/19/25, 3:47 AM
His next truth should be “I hate clothes”. After getting annoyed with how his dick doesn’t fit into pants or something. Followed up by bigger muscles to help carry his huge member.
Anonymous
7/19/25, 2:09 AM
I agree!!!
7/19/25, 12:43 AM
Hello, there! I hope you continue with this story, this instroduction was quite hot, and I'd love to read a follow up. Best regards!
7/19/25, 12:42 AM
Hi! Do you plan to continue this story? It's excellent! I'm hooked to it!
Boomer
9/24/23, 12:47 AM
The story was very good but the AI art at the end spoiled it to be honest.

9/24/23, 2:44 AM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) It's not for everyone, I'm glad you still enjoyed the writing. I'm healing from a serious injury in my right hand and with my design background; making a design helps me conceive the stories, I might update it to be some better art whenever I can!

7/18/25, 10:02 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) A lot of people seem to dislike AI art simply because they prefer something more traditional. i happen to like a whole lot of AI artwork, and that includes your representation of Dr. Bertram and Jimmy. True, the detail isn't sufficient to look like a photograph, but for my imagination they were perfect! Master looks beautiful, impeccable, and intelligent. His eyes, the window into his soul, show him to be cool, thoughtful, and very focused and attentive to whoever he is looking at. His kindness becomes apparent from his conversation, but his eyes while attentive also give us a vague unsubstantiated glimpse into his predatory nature. Jimmy looks the perfectly cute hot slender Asian boy who is naturally submissive and has learned to be attentive and sophisticated. I love both representations!
9/22/23, 12:26 AM
This was super hot. The slow and steady transformation was sexy!

9/22/23, 1:05 AM
@[Heru Kane](/user/show/56823) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

4/12/24, 5:15 AM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) great story. would have loved more detail about Jim's transformation. Wearing servants clothes and doing the tasks

6/15/25, 6:59 AM
@TheSatanScully @[JaAdms](/user/show/10011497) First, i love this story! i particularly liked the way the good doctor planned and implemented his long term plan for transforming and enslaving Jimmy. i appreciate that the Master has indeed contributed to many good things in Jimmy's life, helping him to feel so much more secure and happy. Still, like JaAdms i would have liked longer perhaps more technical inductions, and more detail about the content and approach taken in the DVDs. Like Jimmy i get a lot of pleasure from this sort of "guided meditation", so the longer and more detailed the better! Of course there is also the consideration that the more i like a story, the longer i want it to be. For that reason i am fervently hoping for additional chapters!!

6/18/25, 5:31 PM
@[boi98229](/user/show/10027285) Hey, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I doubt I'll do more chapters of this story but I've been thinking of rewriting it sometime in the future to add more detail and depth to some of the events, as well as play more with both how Carter operates, of course he brings Jimmy a lot of positives in his life because Carter is a fixer at heart, even if he's kind of a cold sociopath, but also to expand a bit on what went on in this year long process, yes, DVDs included!

7/18/25, 9:44 PM
@[TheSatanScully](/user/show/917743) Hello Sir, i just started my 'binge' reading of your stories. i thought it appropriate that i start at the beginning, so just re-read this chapter. i realize that my original comment didn't give it its appropriate accolades. Yes, i did say i loved this story, but i didn't say enough about why. The overall plan for enslaving Jimmy and the detail of every hypnosis training session was perfect! True, if the hypnosis sessions were real and not just a fictional representation, then the sessions would have been longer. Still what you did write for each session was beautifully tailored to work within the overall training plan. My limited experience as an avid but amateur hypnosis subject using and re-using audio training sessions ad infinitum has shown me that hypnosis (at least for me) takes a lot of time and repetition. Everything you wrote and the enslavement plan you devised feels very real to me because you clearly understand that this kind of therapy takes a lot of time. It shows me that you indeed know a lot about hypnosis (at least as a very educated amateur and perhaps more). The DVD training sessions did remain a black box, which i would indeed have liked to have a better understanding, but summarizing them in that way worked just fine for this story.