Recent Comments

8/11/23, 6:49 PM
Ironically, while I agree that as with all Baralai's _fucking hot_ and wildly imaginative stories, the spelling and grammar issues are very distracting, "phone going off" is actually perfectly fine vernacular in this case :-)
8/11/23, 1:18 PM
i love this story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!

8/11/23, 5:39 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Thanks! More is planned out. I have at least 2 more chapters of Dan falling under the control of Zahir's powerful musk. Also working on an hypno-curse story.
8/11/23, 2:25 AM
This is series is perfection. I can’t wait to see Tank again. Did he make more himbo tops às himself?

8/11/23, 3:18 PM
@[Elmara](/user/show/910352) Thank you! And Tank is one of my favorites too. Next chapter does have “dumbing down” component, but it isn’t Tank related and is darker than his sweet himbo antics. Trying to think of a good way to bring Tank and others back that doesn’t feel too repetitive. I’m thinking about starting a separate series for scenes from campus that are just smut and not plot related.
8/11/23, 2:54 PM
Just keep making them bigger! Love this story!
Anonymous
8/11/23, 2:31 PM
I like the direction of where the story is going, just not sure about the wives(ex-wives) also being present in the scenes….. but other than that, really can’t wait for Part 3….
Martin
8/11/23, 1:45 PM
I've assigned your first story to your account (you had submitted it without using an account originally), and I've fixed the author name of the other two stories, I hope that's ok with you.
8/11/23, 12:38 PM
This has been a tremendous tale. The twists and turns are great. I have read this several times, and each time I pick up another clue. Thanks
spiralthiago
8/11/23, 11:14 AM
Exelent!!! Super hot twins
8/11/23, 10:10 AM
A great series by two great authors. The world has lost a real talent. Much love and support to all who knew him <3

8/11/23, 10:58 AM
@[Hypno_boy](/user/show/497726) Thanks we did lose a great guy and a better friend.
TGF
8/11/23, 10:12 AM
sexiest story of the site ! thanks for this one, hope to read more like that soon !