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Anonymous
8/7/23, 10:49 PM
Love it! Love how you always make the dad's so big and sexy!
8/7/23, 10:40 PM
Oh, that's very cool! :heart_eyes: I think Ryan could have been maybe forceshadowed a bit more? But it feels like there's still a lot of things bound to happen, if this is only the half-way point! HYPED!
Jan 13, 2019
8/7/23, 10:02 PM
Cock hardening
8/7/23, 9:52 PM
I simply love this story so much. The idea is top notch. Hope you keep writing as I was waiting this whole year checking now and then if the new part dropped and it finally did. Best regards
8/7/23, 9:10 PM
Jesus Christ wtf
8/7/23, 8:02 PM
It seems to me that transforming a "straight" guy into a submissive bitch would be more difficult (if not impossible) than it seems in this story. The task would have seemed more plausible if Jason had been a little more confused about his sexuality or at least more open to trying something new to him. Alternatively, or even better, in addition to this more realistic starting point, more detail had been developed about the mind control/training techniques, such as Marcos's pharmaceuticals (e.g. his "vitamins") or his audio. For me, since i am so much inclined to submit and obey and enjoy being used by a gay Alpha, I would have sat between Marcos's legs to watch the gay porn. It all works for me, but more detail would have been good. Suggestions aside, thanks for sharing your hot imagination with the rest of us!
8/7/23, 7:41 PM
Incredibleeeee
8/7/23, 7:10 PM
This was a fabulous story! :heart_eyes: Kind of sad it seems to have finished there after all, but who knows. Sometime, stories get sequels WAY later. I think there was a lot of fun stuff that could have happened next...
8/7/23, 6:12 PM
I am already in love with Marcos and the story. I will admit though i find it mildly frustrating that stories involving transformations all the way from "straight to gay" are quite so common on this site. Given the predominance of that tag, it seems I am in the minority on that preference. Fortunately for me, the story is so hot with kinky gay sex and power exchange it is easy to overlook the "straight to gay" aspects of the story. Also, Jason's backstory and his easy-going personality make him quite a lovable character. Very much looking forward to reading on! Thanks for sharing!
8/7/23, 5:32 PM
Let's go right on time for the new chapter!