Recent Comments

Anonymous
8/8/23, 2:18 AM
Hmmm... I'm getting mixed feelings about this. I'm a big fan of CNC but this clearly is not. Then again, I know it's erotic fiction.
Elm
8/8/23, 2:16 AM
Well a proper horror story! It may be a bit too graphic for this site though, seems more fitting for Furaffinity or some site like that rather than this one. Still it's well written! Even If it's not my cup of tea haha.
Apr 18, 2010
8/8/23, 12:56 AM
Hot story! Is 13 years too long to ask for a sequel? :smiling_imp:
Anonymous
8/7/23, 10:49 PM
Love it! Love how you always make the dad's so big and sexy!
8/7/23, 10:40 PM
Oh, that's very cool! :heart_eyes: I think Ryan could have been maybe forceshadowed a bit more? But it feels like there's still a lot of things bound to happen, if this is only the half-way point! HYPED!
Jan 13, 2019
8/7/23, 10:02 PM
Cock hardening
8/7/23, 9:52 PM
I simply love this story so much. The idea is top notch. Hope you keep writing as I was waiting this whole year checking now and then if the new part dropped and it finally did. Best regards
8/7/23, 9:10 PM
Jesus Christ wtf
8/7/23, 8:02 PM
It seems to me that transforming a "straight" guy into a submissive bitch would be more difficult (if not impossible) than it seems in this story. The task would have seemed more plausible if Jason had been a little more confused about his sexuality or at least more open to trying something new to him. Alternatively, or even better, in addition to this more realistic starting point, more detail had been developed about the mind control/training techniques, such as Marcos's pharmaceuticals (e.g. his "vitamins") or his audio. For me, since i am so much inclined to submit and obey and enjoy being used by a gay Alpha, I would have sat between Marcos's legs to watch the gay porn. It all works for me, but more detail would have been good. Suggestions aside, thanks for sharing your hot imagination with the rest of us!
8/7/23, 7:41 PM
Incredibleeeee