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Gay Harem
3/13/23, 9:44 AM
Thank you for participating :blush: I've assigned you rewards~

Anonymous
5/10/25, 4:04 PM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Is this how you worship priapus, the penis. Do i suck on a dick really good mean i am worshipping right
Muscle-Flex
5/10/25, 4:17 PM
There is a bit of a psychological thriller aspect to this story. We know Liam is handsome and well-built from all the time he puts in at the gym. He knows it too as he easily attracts people's attention. But there seems to be streak of insecurity or passiveness in his personality that causes problems in his life. Why doesn't he have friends? The gaslighting aspect is interesting. It's not simply all in Liam's head. The text messages from Noah shows us a game is afoot. It's going to be fun to see what that game is and what the stakes are.

lukas pucci
5/10/25, 5:24 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Damn, dude—was not expecting such a deep read and you’re spot on. Liam’s definitely got that quiet confidence but yeah… there’s a lot he’s not dealing with. You nailed it about the passiveness too, that’s gonna keep coming back. And Noah? Let’s just say the game’s way deeper than it looks right now. Appreciate the thoughtful take, man—it’s exactly the kind of stuff that keeps me hyped to keep writing. Also, Chapter Three is just out hehe
5/10/25, 4:30 PM
I really liked this episode, and I'm really looking forward to this sequel. You could even make it into branches with different endings from the first part.
lukas pucci
5/10/25, 5:07 PM
Whoaaa! Such a great story, im excited to continue! I fucking looove self-resistance and gradual psychological defeat for needing to cum like this. I actually started a story with the same traits hahaha. I’d be honored for your feedback!! Anyway AMAZING writing!!
5/10/25, 5:22 PM
Fuuuck i cant wait for more this is getting so good

lukas pucci
5/10/25, 6:15 PM
@[Ruperstiltskin](/user/show/10029547) dudee, cheers!
5/10/25, 5:25 PM
I’m BEGGING you to continue!!!
Anonymous
5/10/25, 5:31 PM
This is one of the best stories in here I cant wait for more chapters !!!!

lukas pucci
5/10/25, 6:15 PM
@Anonymous 🥵
5/10/25, 5:38 PM
Oy Vey! I hope there’ll eventually be a few more chapters! I’m invested in seeing where this Arc….. “Acipates!”
5/10/25, 5:45 PM
Oh my god, this story is unbelievable. I can't wait to read more, it made me leak so much.

lukas pucci
5/10/25, 6:16 PM
@[BeastBro69](/user/show/277649) it’ll only get more fucked up from this point on!
5/10/25, 5:49 PM
Wow! It didn't even get to oral and my hand is doing with my dick what Liam's is doing with Noah's. Ending is so hot too! Will it continue right at Noah's place? Or will they get back to gym and Noah would need to find another way to get Liam alone. Although I doubt it would be hard to do. He could just tell him that they'd go all the way next time and Liam would be his in the locker room. Every chapter is better and sexier. Can't get enough. Great work!

lukas pucci
5/10/25, 6:19 PM
@[twinger18](/user/show/10012300) “Glad you’re enjoying the tease, man. Let’s just say Noah’s not done being creative. Locker room? Bed? Wherever he wants him, Liam’s not exactly saying no these days. It’s only get worse from here.