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Elm
8/7/23, 1:31 PM
Hi there! Thank you for your comment. I will try and answer some of your questions haha. You will definitely get at least a small introduction to Josh and Teddy, so just sit tight! I wasn't aware you guys didn't use it :smiling_face_with_tear: my program didn't correct it (google docs + grammarly) guess I will keep them in, since they help me compartmentalize. There is no connection really, I added it to exemplify just how in a hurry Tom was, and how he is still getting to know himself // doesn't have a hold into all the things he likes (kind of like a teaser for things he is willing/wants to try). For that last one... Hehe :satisfied: just wait and see! I do take suggestions though! Turns out I write better within a stricter set of boundaries. Go figure :man_shrugging:
7/31/23, 5:04 AM
Going through your catalog right now, really enjoying myself. Loved loved loved (!!!) Greek; I think it's always so interesting to see what authors do with women in gay erotica, especially fantasy/magic erotica. Also thankful that at least someone will be reigning in Lewis in the coming magical harem. fantastic work, thanks for sharing!

7/31/23, 1:35 PM
@[whatknife](/user/show/10003454) @[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Now I kinda want an ending where Greek, as the one who has both a working brain and the ability to remember how things where even after they change will rule them all.

8/6/23, 8:15 PM
@[whatknife](/user/show/10003454) Thanks! I wanted to do something with a character who could comment on the mind-control/magic stuff without being part of the erotic action. A sort of Greek chorus, if you will :wink:. Some of my favorite long-format erotica stories have women in roles other than 'jilted lover who curses a horrible straight guy with gayness' or similar tropes I see pop up a lot.

8/6/23, 8:16 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Oh, I have something much more unusual planned for Greek and the boys :smiling_imp:.

8/7/23, 1:12 PM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) Is there a Greek version to "color me curious"?
Anonymous
8/7/23, 9:57 AM
sooo hot!!! amazing transformation descriptions too…
8/7/23, 6:02 AM
Very interesting variation on the mind control trope. Looking forward to leaning more about the app's rules, not to mention meeting Josh and his...conquest. No worries about your writing. The only hint I saw that your first language is Spanish is those inverted punctuation marks at the beginnings of some sentences. I'm sure you just forgot that we don't use them in English - or does your writing program put them there automatically? Maybe you could clarify the connection between the app and Tom's stink? Does Tom's power wane when he's clean? As for suggestions for orders...how about Dad washing Tom's body in the shower?
spiralthiago
8/6/23, 12:10 PM
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Gay Harem
8/7/23, 5:36 AM
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8/5/23, 6:21 AM
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Gay Harem
8/7/23, 5:34 AM
@[stonegrey](/user/show/925205) Hey! I just gave you rewards.:blush: As for the promo code - I just tested it and it worked fine :thinking:
8/7/23, 4:33 AM
That’s a really great story. Love rubber and chastity! So hot.
8/7/23, 3:28 AM
I want to thank the people whose writing inspired this story (which is too many to list, but almost everyone I read on GSS and mcstories over the years), and to thank those that read it. I know I was encouraged to keep going by ratings and comments. Special thanks to Topaz, whose story [Various Techniques](https://mcstories.com/VariousTechniques/index.html) is what lead to my hypno-awakening in college, as well as @[Derek Williams](/user/show/175661) one of my favorite authors who directly encouraged me to finish this story. Go read their stuff. I don't currently intend to write a sequel, but the door is open for one. For more of these characters please see [Sinners & Saints: Tales from Campus](https://www.gayspiralstories.com/series/show/10003434) for short stand-alone stories (more smut, less plot!) After all, the was a week of unexplored kinky gay sex as the campus was corrupted in Chapter 12. I have a few ideas already for Tales from Campus, and always happy to hear more from readers. I also have some ideas for new unrelated stories rattling around in my head that I might put to paper sometime. Thanks again for reading.
8/7/23, 3:08 AM
Ready for the next installment of what is proving to be a great story
8/7/23, 2:44 AM
This is hot.