Recent Comments

Zander
5/2/25, 10:01 AM
I hope there will be a continuation of this story and very soon. Is it possible to read this story somewhere else? I am really looking forward to the interaction of Zulu with the Emperor (how he turns him into a whore) and in the end with Takeo.

5/10/25, 10:14 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Yes there will be ! Maybe you can try on telemachus12 website !? Stories posted there too !

Zander
5/10/25, 10:25 AM
@[Gaeten5588](/user/show/10014337) Thank you very much for the tip. I saw that the release dates of the chapters are indicated there)
5/10/25, 12:22 PM
WOW! This was just the most fun EVER. Logan's pit at the end... OMGosh. Ill never get over this story.

5/11/25, 5:06 PM
@[MChicago](/user/show/10024403) Much appreciated!
5/10/25, 1:19 PM
this is amazing, more? and hopefully longer haha

5/11/25, 12:56 PM
@[jacobmitenko](/user/show/13891) will definitely consider, thanks for reading!!
5/10/25, 1:47 PM
Thanks! More to cum
5/10/25, 2:31 PM
Very hot concept!
Muscle-Flex
5/10/25, 3:46 PM
Great job with character and dialog! I got attached to Pig and Tyler and Nick. The mix of hot studs, arousing sexual exploration, humor, and plausible reality is well done as is the evolving storyline of sexual attraction and power dynamics (if I'm reading into it correctly.)
Gay Harem
3/13/23, 9:44 AM
Thank you for participating :blush: I've assigned you rewards~

Anonymous
5/10/25, 4:04 PM
@[Gay Harem](/user/show/10032681) Is this how you worship priapus, the penis. Do i suck on a dick really good mean i am worshipping right
Muscle-Flex
5/10/25, 4:17 PM
There is a bit of a psychological thriller aspect to this story. We know Liam is handsome and well-built from all the time he puts in at the gym. He knows it too as he easily attracts people's attention. But there seems to be streak of insecurity or passiveness in his personality that causes problems in his life. Why doesn't he have friends? The gaslighting aspect is interesting. It's not simply all in Liam's head. The text messages from Noah shows us a game is afoot. It's going to be fun to see what that game is and what the stakes are.

lukas pucci
5/10/25, 5:24 PM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Damn, dude—was not expecting such a deep read and you’re spot on. Liam’s definitely got that quiet confidence but yeah… there’s a lot he’s not dealing with. You nailed it about the passiveness too, that’s gonna keep coming back. And Noah? Let’s just say the game’s way deeper than it looks right now. Appreciate the thoughtful take, man—it’s exactly the kind of stuff that keeps me hyped to keep writing. Also, Chapter Three is just out hehe
5/10/25, 4:30 PM
I really liked this episode, and I'm really looking forward to this sequel. You could even make it into branches with different endings from the first part.
lukas pucci
5/10/25, 5:07 PM
Whoaaa! Such a great story, im excited to continue! I fucking looove self-resistance and gradual psychological defeat for needing to cum like this. I actually started a story with the same traits hahaha. I’d be honored for your feedback!! Anyway AMAZING writing!!