Recent Comments

8/5/23, 5:20 PM
I love the idea of goonstench just taking over the whole school, and yeah it obviously starts in the boy's locker room but then it stinks up the whole gym and the mess halls, classrooms aren't even safe- and don't get me started on auditoriums!
7/24/23, 1:49 AM
This really hits my buttons and the writing is very good. I'd just say don't try to ram the descriptions in so hard at the start. It's jarring and the reader knows you're trying to get the descriptive stuff in too much, but you can tell later on you're way better at slipping the details in then. I think it's a lot more natural for you to take your time on the descriptive bits than try to push too much in right up front, and you've got the writing talent to do that for sure!

Author (name hidden)
8/5/23, 4:50 PM
@[edhypnofan](/user/show/10002490) Yeah, sorry. Was my first time writing a TF story, and I was a bit rushing to not hit deadline, could not make the description smoother. But I felt it was needed to get a bit of an idea of what everyone looked like early on. Thanks!
8/4/23, 3:22 PM
Just when I was thinking about the pharaoh's story! Fun worldbuilding. OwO

8/5/23, 3:58 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) There are many, many stories that have been unknown to humanity so far.
peter
8/5/23, 3:30 PM
need another chapter please.
8/5/23, 1:12 PM
THAT was the best story I have read in such a long long time. The recollections from Jack and Tristan are brilliant. PLEASE write a follow up. Your writing style is just PERFECTION
8/5/23, 11:38 AM
The only part that disappointed me a bit was when Mr. Graham seemed to show the son a lot of respect and adoration for his beauty. I assumed you would take it in the direction of having Aston become his boyfriend/someone with a higher position than just another subordinate.
Suitlover
8/5/23, 8:41 AM
Love this series. Great job. Reading this makes me so hard. The next one should be the Captain of the police station turned into a daddy pig. Asking Stellato and Bradley about their strange behavior….. He should be forced on Tanner‘s cock till he accept how good it feels to suck on a cock while his former straight ass get fucked and his own cock locked into a tiny cage….!
Anonymous
8/5/23, 7:43 AM
super hot!! can't wait fo the next chapter
Jul 21, 2023
8/5/23, 5:42 AM
Fucking HOT!!
8/5/23, 4:19 AM
More more please more! Hopefully the next chapter come out sooner!