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8/5/23, 11:10 PM
Hooray. I've been eagerly awaiting an update to this story. I'm so turned on by a corruption story. I'm very excited to see these poor boys reduced to "filthy little beasts" with all sorts of sexual focus. While I lament Gabe losing his connection to his friends, making Sloth more about indifference than laziness was a stroke of genius. It also very easily sets up why he would so easily succumb to the incubi and let them change his friends as well. Picking the gooner to take the stone and be the first demon's victim really was a smart move by the powers that be. :D VERY excited for another chapter.

8/6/23, 5:06 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for reading and commenting again! Glad you appreciated Gabe’s comfy slide into darkness 😜
8/6/23, 1:44 AM
Ooooh! Let’s have a guessing game. We know Gabe is taken by the Demon of Sloth, so that leaves six to corrupt. Eli, with his “holier-than-thou” attitude, might be a candidate for Pride, but his desire for Ian’s life could also be Envy. The vanilla Blake (and let me just say “kinky as a Care Bear” is a BRILLIANT turn of phrase!) could be consumed by Lust. Lazy Ian would be slothful, but that’s taken—maybe Envy, since he wants to be someone else? Or Gluttony, since he wants to consume a lot of cock? And that leaves Romeo, who’s a bit harder…he has a gentle exterior and kind heart, so maybe raging Wrath? And that leaves Avarice and Gluttony/Envy unclaimed—perhaps others join the fray? Can’t wait to see what happens!

8/6/23, 5:03 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) I’m glad you enjoyed it; and so happy to read your thoughts! I’m excited to try and meet your expectations 😁 (And I _was_ very satisfied w that ‘Care Bear’ line 😆)
CHT
8/6/23, 1:04 AM
Like where its heading ....
8/5/23, 10:38 PM
Now im curious about the end. Did Gold really escaped the Subduer and got his memory/self back, except the powers, or is this just part of subduers plan? Cant wait for the next chapter. And again amazing and interesting story.

8/5/23, 11:48 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! Hope you enjoy what's coming! Hmm,... I wonder which it is? Maybe The Subduer is going to regret heading off to bed when all sorts of exciting things are unfolding in his lab,...
8/5/23, 11:20 PM
Great story so far. Love the gradual transformation of the young jock to a submissive soon-to-be slave.
8/5/23, 11:06 PM
Will we also get a 7.2 with the details of what happened with that James fellow?
6/19/23, 5:45 AM
It does seem like right now, 013 can't just read Jamie's thoughts, or at least can't unless Jamie thinks right at him. What seems to be happening at the moment is that 013 speaks in Jamie's head, but Jamie has to speak out loud for 013 to hear him. I suppose that the dialog between them could be entirely internal, though. We don't really have proof either way. @NeonDemon, if you're lurking, can you clarify?

8/5/23, 10:49 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) yeah, if 013 and Jamie have merged down to the fundamental level where their identities are entangled, then shouldnt their conscious thought be as well? it could be cool if ever attempt of Jamie trying to secretly "trick" Master is detected by the symbiote, and Jamie is disciplined :3
Zander
8/5/23, 8:44 PM
i liked the story
Anonymous
8/5/23, 8:17 PM
Matty will likely prevail in the end,but the pervert in me,and privately just loves EVIL EDDIE.Kinda wished he'd get the other entrapped men to embrace their darker evil side and poor little Matty will end up in a gang-bang,which would be hot even with the slaves being mindless
8/4/23, 6:39 AM
Yay you're back!! A hot chapter for a hot story in a hot dimension! I can't believe we finally found out what is this war they are all preparing for! Sounds like a battle I would love to take part in. Then again, I might be too busy falling into the water, clumsy me. It's very interesting to see the interaction between those three (even though Talley can be a douche sometimes). I wonder what will happen when Marco meets Nate's new friends. I can't decide if I should gamble on Marco being jealous or not. Can't wait for the next chapter!

8/5/23, 7:55 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Heh, seems I've been edging the readers on frat warfare all this time, but the secret was going to come out eventually! In future revisions of the story I might make it clearer earlier on--maybe even in the first chapter. We'll see. I also really appreciate how excited you are about this story; that kind of thing helps give me motivation to keep going when the writing gets tough. Talley can be a douche, but (at least for him) it's all in good fun, and Nate seems to think it's part of the 'bro code', even if Arik disagrees. I hope you enjoyed the interactions!