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CHT
8/6/23, 1:04 AM
Like where its heading ....
8/5/23, 10:38 PM
Now im curious about the end. Did Gold really escaped the Subduer and got his memory/self back, except the powers, or is this just part of subduers plan? Cant wait for the next chapter. And again amazing and interesting story.

8/5/23, 11:48 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Thank you! Hope you enjoy what's coming! Hmm,... I wonder which it is? Maybe The Subduer is going to regret heading off to bed when all sorts of exciting things are unfolding in his lab,...
8/5/23, 11:20 PM
Great story so far. Love the gradual transformation of the young jock to a submissive soon-to-be slave.
8/5/23, 11:06 PM
Will we also get a 7.2 with the details of what happened with that James fellow?
6/19/23, 5:45 AM
It does seem like right now, 013 can't just read Jamie's thoughts, or at least can't unless Jamie thinks right at him. What seems to be happening at the moment is that 013 speaks in Jamie's head, but Jamie has to speak out loud for 013 to hear him. I suppose that the dialog between them could be entirely internal, though. We don't really have proof either way. @NeonDemon, if you're lurking, can you clarify?

8/5/23, 10:49 PM
@[copsboy64](/user/show/910425) yeah, if 013 and Jamie have merged down to the fundamental level where their identities are entangled, then shouldnt their conscious thought be as well? it could be cool if ever attempt of Jamie trying to secretly "trick" Master is detected by the symbiote, and Jamie is disciplined :3
Zander
8/5/23, 8:44 PM
i liked the story
Anonymous
8/5/23, 8:17 PM
Matty will likely prevail in the end,but the pervert in me,and privately just loves EVIL EDDIE.Kinda wished he'd get the other entrapped men to embrace their darker evil side and poor little Matty will end up in a gang-bang,which would be hot even with the slaves being mindless
8/4/23, 6:39 AM
Yay you're back!! A hot chapter for a hot story in a hot dimension! I can't believe we finally found out what is this war they are all preparing for! Sounds like a battle I would love to take part in. Then again, I might be too busy falling into the water, clumsy me. It's very interesting to see the interaction between those three (even though Talley can be a douche sometimes). I wonder what will happen when Marco meets Nate's new friends. I can't decide if I should gamble on Marco being jealous or not. Can't wait for the next chapter!

8/5/23, 7:55 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) Heh, seems I've been edging the readers on frat warfare all this time, but the secret was going to come out eventually! In future revisions of the story I might make it clearer earlier on--maybe even in the first chapter. We'll see. I also really appreciate how excited you are about this story; that kind of thing helps give me motivation to keep going when the writing gets tough. Talley can be a douche, but (at least for him) it's all in good fun, and Nate seems to think it's part of the 'bro code', even if Arik disagrees. I hope you enjoyed the interactions!
7/18/23, 10:59 PM
As always, another wonderful chapter, Soren. And it's great to see months of preparation, planning, and writing come to fruition! The interactions between Talley and Nate were the highlight of the chapter for me, personally, and I can't wait to see how more outrageous the two boys will get in their efforts to prove their manhood to the other. And your refs, as usual, are all mouthwatering! You have _very_ good taste! Keep up the great work!

8/5/23, 7:49 PM
@[Franco Apollo](/user/show/10029736) Two bottom-coded frat boys with a chip on their shoulder? Who knows what shenanigans they'll get up to... I'm really glad you enjoyed it; it took me long enough to finally get it out, but I'm glad I did!
Anonymous
8/5/23, 7:19 PM
Please please PLEASE make a sequel to this! I really wanna know what happens inside that magic box (also wanna go there ahahaha)