Recent Comments

8/3/23, 2:29 PM
Wow. I’m at a loss as what to say except I admire your loyalty and compassion and believe Oliver would be proud and eager to see where you take his creation ultimately. Much respect.

8/3/23, 9:05 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Thanks, I hope he likes it whereever he is.
Axelcyclone
8/3/23, 6:15 PM
No way Oliver passed? Man I remember when we would talk through emails when he was first writing these stories on Yahoo groups. We would bounce off ideas and he would inspire me to try writing stories and then contact fell off when Yahoo groups died off. I wish I was able to stay in contact with him because he was a genious writer. Funny enough while reading this newer donnie clone I was thinking about how much it reminded me of Olivers Donnie from the original stories. Im sure he would have loved every chapter you made Jack and thanks for getting this story out and letting us know what has happened. Im sure a lot of us will miss Oliver.

8/3/23, 9:04 PM
@Axelcyclone He was a great guy, huge loss for all of us.
Lampshade15
8/3/23, 7:59 PM
I loved this story, great wanking material. It's always a pleasure to read about a domineering daddy and his eager son.
5/31/21, 8:46 PM
I've thought about doing an experienced vs. amateur hypnotist battle before myself, the idea being almost identical to the scene in this chapter, but this was done a lot more gradually and enticingly than I know I would've written. Very well done!

8/3/23, 2:26 PM
@[RobinHood70](/user/show/24261) Really? Where was the 'consent'? Where was the fantasy element? Surely this is abusive, isn't it?

8/3/23, 5:22 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) Huh? All due respect, but I really don't think this is a realistic depiction of what hypnosis can do in RL. IOW, seems pretty fantasy to me. But, hey, YMMV. ETA: Also, over-the-top hypnotism exactly like this comprises a lot of stuff on this site; if you're trying to rule that out of bounds, you'd probably have to delete hundreds of stories. I'm reluctantly starting to agree with that guy on the boards who says that political correctness is getting out of control. Just for me, personally, this is getting ridiculous.

Swizz
8/3/23, 5:58 PM
@[Retrofantasia](/user/show/19530) Well...the funny thing about your comment is I'm pretty sure M.Greene - the guy you just replied to - is also the "guy on the boards" you're reluctantly starting to agree with.

8/3/23, 6:05 PM
@[Swizz](/user/show/70704) Heh! ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Poe's Law strikes again. ETA: Off Team “P.C. Out Of Control,” at least for the time being. :-)

Nutiper
8/3/23, 6:33 PM
@[Retrofantasia](/user/show/19530) Yeah I was going to say (though Swizz beat me to it!) that M. Greene _is_ the guy on the boards saying that political correctness is getting out of control in the comment sections. M. Greene's comment isn't meant genuinely, it's just him mocking what he thinks political correctness sounds like in order to be an ass to Robin. (Sorry M. Greene, love your stories, but you are being a bit of an ass!)

8/3/23, 6:43 PM
@[Nutiper](/user/show/25270) As I referenced above, Poe’s law.

Martin
8/3/23, 7:18 PM
@[M. Greene](/user/show/130901) This is not appreciated at all and I think you know it. You wanna be an ass, be it somewhere else. I'm just tired of these attitudes. If you have a beef with me, take it out on me on the forum or in a PM, not here on the comments.
8/3/23, 6:35 PM
I cannot wait to see the steps of the plan play out!
Anonymous
8/3/23, 6:25 PM
First, i love your story and i wait eagerly every week to read the new chapter. Would be interesting if you make a "slave auction" where all the gay boys in the club recieve at least one jock slave. And consider the idea where Justin start to feel envy of the blissful obedience of the slaves and in some momment become the first voluntary slave. Or he could even try to defy Dexter (and the whole story about the customer bullied by Chad, its just a lie to steal Chad from Dex) and recieve the punishment he was seeking for the bullies
Zander
8/2/23, 4:27 PM
I really liked your story, I hope there will be a continuation? I also want to know what happened to the Destroyer in the human body)

8/3/23, 5:59 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) Oh now you've done it, I thought I was done with this setting but you've given me ideas to work with.
Thom
8/3/23, 5:24 PM
You've got a great writing style! I'm a bit tired, so I had a little trouble understanding some of the character relationships early on. I eventually understood all of that though, only for that thing with Gabe to happen at the end. It could just be because I'm tired, but I have absolutely no clue what happened at the end there with the ruby and the new person 😂

8/3/23, 5:37 PM
@[Thom](/user/show/908711) The next chapter will make it a little more clear hopefully 😂 We don’t know much here other than that the ruby embedded itself in Gabe after he came on it and that caused the blue-skinned man to…emerge. More context incoming 😁
8/3/23, 5:00 PM
There are some great twists and turns in this story. I’m really intrigued to see where we go next as it seems like Jonathan surely can’t fall much further. I also wonder where Jacob will wind up in all this, as he’s clearly been possessed by some kind of demon or spirit. I’m hoping for a happy ending but maybe with a delicious mind and body bending twist!
Lampshade15
8/3/23, 4:48 PM
Another hot story!