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7/31/23, 3:46 AM
Just gonna add my voice to the chorus here -- an amazing execution of a common trope around here, revivifying it. Such good writing, so incredibly erotic, and told from the perfect perspective. Kudos!

7/31/23, 9:17 PM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
7/31/23, 9:08 PM
This was beautifully written. I loved the showcasing of how seemingly small moments can hit us hard as kids. I remember my dad once telling me that boys didn't button their shirts from the bottom, only girls did. He always had phrases like that. I did it because I'd sometimes get the buttons lopsided if I did it from the top, but it was always making me think of if I was doing things "wrong" as a boy. I told my dad about this decades later and he was baffled at his own comment. We don't even think about this stuff and how it impacts our psyche. But I think you carried that well. In fact, this was so beautifully done for the toxic masculinity part that the romance bits and your usual merging thing kinda felt tacked on -- not because they were bad, they were fine -- but because they didn't much hit with the same flair as the larger theme. Anyway. This wasn't really erotica, but it was amazing to me.
Dec 22, 2019
7/31/23, 8:48 PM
This one actually got my curiosity up, but ended too soon! I hope you finish it someday.
7/31/23, 8:05 PM
*fans myself* I do declare, I have the *vapors* over what you wrote. So romantic and steamy, with just enough comedy that doesn't take you out of the story being told. And I felt like I was *there*. Seriously, so good.
7/31/23, 8:03 PM
I hope Matthew gets revenge on Eddie though. Could be an interesting twist
7/31/23, 6:20 PM
such a fuckin hot series!!
abc123
7/30/23, 8:27 AM
please make the dad the bottom!

Elm
7/31/23, 5:23 PM
@[abc123](/user/show/10005430) Oh don't you worry about that :smiling_imp:

Elm
7/31/23, 5:41 PM
@[abc123](/user/show/10005430) Oh don't you worry about that :smiling_imp:
7/31/23, 5:39 PM
> “He’s not a bum!” > “No” Sean confirms. “Quite the opposite." Ok, that got me. I giggled my head off!
7/29/23, 10:30 PM
Oh wow. Ive read this whole story and it is so hot. I hope the next chapter is not too long since i enjoyed this story. And im guessing Gabriel is the Angel. And now im thinking if the ending fight will be between Gabriel and Ryan; or Gabriel might saved Ryan and its gonna be a fight between Gabriel and Michael.

7/31/23, 2:45 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Glad you are enjoying the series as a whole. I really appreciate the long-time readers, especially those that seem into the story and the sex. Thank you for reading, and I guess you'll have to see how it all ends in just a few chapters :)

7/31/23, 3:53 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Oh im not a long time reader, i just discovered it because of the update. And i fell inlove with it so i read the whole thing in one go. So yeah, looking forward for the update
Anonymous
7/31/23, 3:09 PM
sooo hot!!! love a big red muscle daddy transformation… so well written… love some resistance… followed by some hunger… hope James has more encounters soon…