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Ken
7/27/23, 11:57 PM
And one question, when ghosts possess a human, can they also use those abilities?

ghostwriter
7/27/23, 11:59 PM
@Ken Yes! Takes a bit longer to activate but yes they can!

Ken
7/28/23, 4:18 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) great I wish I was a ghost it seems fun and what other powers do ghosts have?

Anonymous
7/31/23, 4:37 AM
@Ken the typical: intangibility, flight, invisibility, possession but these ghosts can also shapeshift, teleport, multiply, move objects without touching them, they can also sorta read minds/dreams/fears, etc.

Ken
7/31/23, 4:41 AM
@Anonymous I understand that it's great and hey seriously I really loved the images you put in your story I felt them very hot

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 4:42 AM
@Ken thanks! @wolfbear303 on twitter made them, he has more stuff there

Ken
7/31/23, 4:51 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) and one question, how did you come up with the story you did with Ollie and the ghosts?

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 4:53 AM
@Ken just came to me, i just like goofy ghost stuff

Ken
7/31/23, 5:01 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) oh I understand is that I really liked the story a lot that makes me want to become a ghost and be part of Ollie's group of friends

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 5:03 AM
@Ken that's cool! if you ever need me to write a story for you, you can email me at theghostwriter19@gmail.com for commission info!

Ken
7/31/23, 5:05 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) maybe it will but how much would i have to pay for the commission

Ken
7/31/23, 5:35 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) Or what would be the issue of payment for the commission?

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 1:15 PM
@Ken It's $10/page (12 point, single space) with a five page minimum. I use PayPal.
Anonymous
7/31/23, 6:38 AM
Long time fan. Great story and can’t wait for more.

7/31/23, 9:39 AM
@Anonymous Thanks. Part four and the epilogue is awaiting approval for posting. Prob this week.
Anon
7/22/23, 12:34 PM
I've been reading this one since you started. Such a hot and well written story. Thanks for sharing it.

7/22/23, 10:12 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/10001245) Hard to believe it’s been almost two years! Very glad you found it hot.

Anonymous
7/31/23, 6:03 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) It's really one of the hottest father/son long story I've read! I haven't written much in a while but now I'm inspired to write some myself!
Zander
7/31/23, 4:17 AM
Thank you for continuing, it's a pity that the story has short chapters. I hope the ending of the story will not let you down and everything will end with a pleasant surprise
7/31/23, 4:07 AM
That was so good! I loved the build-up, and the slow realization that it was an external force.
7/31/23, 2:20 AM
I LOVE this series. It's so fun, hot, and sexy. I love your writing style and the brainwashing and mind break aspects of the story especially. The almost-too-easy acceptance of something that shouldn't make any sense at all and should shock them from the get go, yet doesn't when Alex explains it like it's nothing, is great. Like, oh, so I just need to swallow your cum and get creampied by you to get protein? Sure, don't see anything wrong with that! And the fact that all these straight dudues are seeing this through their heterosexual lenses, deluding themselves (or actually truly believing) that none of this is gay and it's just to score some brotein, is such a turn on. Seeing the Coach, the boys, and the hot married dads (another major kink of mine) slowly being mind broken and corrupted by their craving for brotein is so hot and up my alley. I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/30/23, 6:38 PM
Campus corruption stories and gooning are two of my favourite kinks so I’m over the moon to see them combined here in such a well written and fucking debauched manner. Also, kudos to how quickly you’re turning these chapters out. You write better and faster than I do! Keep the bate fuel flowing!

7/31/23, 2:17 AM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thank you, I’m very flattered! I just get the itch and have to get the story out of me 😂 I’m glad you’ve been enjoying, stay tuned
7/30/23, 8:32 AM
I'm really glad Evan and Adam were able to reconcile their differences. Very sweet. Adam even gave Evan the gift of perverting him and helping him embrace debauchery. The overwhelming cloud of a weekend's worth of masturbation and sweat incapacitating Evan when he opened the doors was a great touch. The trap was clearly laid well. It's interesting to see this, knowing what Christian did in his dorm. That the stench itself is more gradual, able to resisted for a little while until it really takes hold unless it is concentrated. The dorm room heater really gains another layer with this in mind. Seeing the larger picture with this story, that there are many other goonfiends lurking around campus, is exciting. We knew Christian wasn't the first but we didn't have a sense that he wasn't the only one working on ensnaring a lot of others with horny smell to get their brains leaking out their cocks. Your roommate to share the love of gooning is one thing, but a full frat house is a new level. But that seems to be the nature of the condition after seeing its origins. I love that. Everyone should get to enjoy it. ;) Seeing this crossing over with Christian and his roomie's corrupting the frat house was a nice surprise. It makes me think that the sports team Stenchers were planning something like that themselves but showed up to find they could just relax and enjoy the masses of frat bros fixated on cum and pleasure instead.

7/31/23, 2:15 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for your comment, bro! I’m definitely excited to get into this next phase of the story.
7/30/23, 10:28 PM
I approved this, but you may want to consider switching the many many black quotes used for dialogue in the story to quotation marks "like this" -- I think it would make the story easier and more enjoyable for readers to read. As it stands, I found those block quotes really took me out of the flow of the story. This is a fun concept! Nicely done!

7/31/23, 12:23 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Hello, my dear! Thank you so much for your comment. I was really thinking the same when I read again, after publishing. I will mark the cotes "this form" on next chapters. <3

7/31/23, 12:29 AM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Hi Jota! It's also possible to edit this chapter by using the Author and Reviewer panel if you like!

7/31/23, 12:37 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I'll do that as soon as possible! Thanks! <3
7/31/23, 12:33 AM
Amazing how fast he changed from agent to fuck boy. The wonders of modern science. I'd love access to such a set up and start turning out perfect lovers. The physical transformation was fast but the psychological one was a slow burn.