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7/31/23, 5:39 PM
> “He’s not a bum!” > “No” Sean confirms. “Quite the opposite." Ok, that got me. I giggled my head off!
7/29/23, 10:30 PM
Oh wow. Ive read this whole story and it is so hot. I hope the next chapter is not too long since i enjoyed this story. And im guessing Gabriel is the Angel. And now im thinking if the ending fight will be between Gabriel and Ryan; or Gabriel might saved Ryan and its gonna be a fight between Gabriel and Michael.

7/31/23, 2:45 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Glad you are enjoying the series as a whole. I really appreciate the long-time readers, especially those that seem into the story and the sex. Thank you for reading, and I guess you'll have to see how it all ends in just a few chapters :)

7/31/23, 3:53 PM
@[Naedre](/user/show/931338) Oh im not a long time reader, i just discovered it because of the update. And i fell inlove with it so i read the whole thing in one go. So yeah, looking forward for the update
Anonymous
7/31/23, 3:09 PM
sooo hot!!! love a big red muscle daddy transformation… so well written… love some resistance… followed by some hunger… hope James has more encounters soon…
Anonymous
7/31/23, 2:03 PM
intensely hot!!!
Ken
7/27/23, 11:57 PM
And one question, when ghosts possess a human, can they also use those abilities?

ghostwriter
7/27/23, 11:59 PM
@Ken Yes! Takes a bit longer to activate but yes they can!

Ken
7/28/23, 4:18 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) great I wish I was a ghost it seems fun and what other powers do ghosts have?

Anonymous
7/31/23, 4:37 AM
@Ken the typical: intangibility, flight, invisibility, possession but these ghosts can also shapeshift, teleport, multiply, move objects without touching them, they can also sorta read minds/dreams/fears, etc.

Ken
7/31/23, 4:41 AM
@Anonymous I understand that it's great and hey seriously I really loved the images you put in your story I felt them very hot

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 4:42 AM
@Ken thanks! @wolfbear303 on twitter made them, he has more stuff there

Ken
7/31/23, 4:51 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) and one question, how did you come up with the story you did with Ollie and the ghosts?

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 4:53 AM
@Ken just came to me, i just like goofy ghost stuff

Ken
7/31/23, 5:01 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) oh I understand is that I really liked the story a lot that makes me want to become a ghost and be part of Ollie's group of friends

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 5:03 AM
@Ken that's cool! if you ever need me to write a story for you, you can email me at theghostwriter19@gmail.com for commission info!

Ken
7/31/23, 5:05 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) maybe it will but how much would i have to pay for the commission

Ken
7/31/23, 5:35 AM
@[ghostwriter](/user/show/2724803) Or what would be the issue of payment for the commission?

ghostwriter
7/31/23, 1:15 PM
@Ken It's $10/page (12 point, single space) with a five page minimum. I use PayPal.
Anonymous
7/31/23, 6:38 AM
Long time fan. Great story and can’t wait for more.

7/31/23, 9:39 AM
@Anonymous Thanks. Part four and the epilogue is awaiting approval for posting. Prob this week.
Anon
7/22/23, 12:34 PM
I've been reading this one since you started. Such a hot and well written story. Thanks for sharing it.

7/22/23, 10:12 PM
@[Anon](/user/show/10001245) Hard to believe it’s been almost two years! Very glad you found it hot.

Anonymous
7/31/23, 6:03 AM
@[S. Q. Neemie](/user/show/767920) It's really one of the hottest father/son long story I've read! I haven't written much in a while but now I'm inspired to write some myself!
Zander
7/31/23, 4:17 AM
Thank you for continuing, it's a pity that the story has short chapters. I hope the ending of the story will not let you down and everything will end with a pleasant surprise
7/31/23, 4:07 AM
That was so good! I loved the build-up, and the slow realization that it was an external force.
7/31/23, 2:20 AM
I LOVE this series. It's so fun, hot, and sexy. I love your writing style and the brainwashing and mind break aspects of the story especially. The almost-too-easy acceptance of something that shouldn't make any sense at all and should shock them from the get go, yet doesn't when Alex explains it like it's nothing, is great. Like, oh, so I just need to swallow your cum and get creampied by you to get protein? Sure, don't see anything wrong with that! And the fact that all these straight dudues are seeing this through their heterosexual lenses, deluding themselves (or actually truly believing) that none of this is gay and it's just to score some brotein, is such a turn on. Seeing the Coach, the boys, and the hot married dads (another major kink of mine) slowly being mind broken and corrupted by their craving for brotein is so hot and up my alley. I can't wait for the next chapter!