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Sep 18, 2022
Anonymous
8/1/23, 10:55 AM
Lucky Lawrence!!!
Mar 23, 2023
Bob
8/1/23, 9:11 AM
Disturbing.
8/1/23, 5:24 AM
Yeah, that was some good shot—great anticipation, and I’m left wondering how the forfeits will work, and what strange and sexy rules they’ve all concocted. I personally love when guys engage in play that they’ve consented to and hashed out. And with rope, too? Count me in!
8/1/23, 5:19 AM
This is a cool idea! It’s a pity I didn’t read it right when I saw it, but I haven’t been in much of a reading mood. I like the tension between Aiden and Bryan there; I’ll go find out more right now, huh?
8/1/23, 2:03 AM
Came 3 times reading it. It's that good!

8/1/23, 5:04 AM
@[Gasp](/user/show/10006939) Wow, thank you, that is _very_ high praise, haha! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Q
7/20/23, 2:15 PM
Is there gonna be a sequel?

8/1/23, 3:55 AM
@Q No plans for a sequel. I just write one-shots and games.
7/17/23, 11:54 AM
Would love to read more stories like this extremely well written.

8/1/23, 3:54 AM
@[Darby Thomas](/user/show/10017156) Well come back after the author reveal. I've got a couple more stories that I think are pretty great.
7/30/23, 9:52 PM
Oh good LORD, what an ENDING! I’m a sucker for sweet stories about love, and watching Will and Connor confess their feelings is so cute. And yet you did a great job providing a sinister undercurrent: love or not, they’ve still been brainwashed into being into gaining and laziness. Was the love always there, or is it a result of the experiment? Or does it matter? That IS a _riddle_, isn’t it… Also, the scene where all of the guys join together and feast has that similar dichotomy: joy at them being reunited, but also sinister in the fact that they were hypnotized to have totally different personalities. Amazing! In addition to a big fat epilogue, it would be cool to hear a detail that the plan has been working in other countries—a sign that the experiment was a success. Congratulations on your incredible story! :)

8/1/23, 2:31 AM
@[Feed Your Head](/user/show/1170832) Yeees the dubious nature of all relationships was an interesting concept I wanted to tackle, that and the guilt if enabling or interfering in peoples relations. Im happy you liked it 💚
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/30/23, 6:53 PM
Sorry to see the story end. I always enjoy reading about in-shape straight men becoming fat, over-indulgent gay pigs! But it was a good ending, nonetheless.

8/1/23, 2:29 AM
@slavethruhypno@yahoo.com Thanks for the comments, Im thinking about expanding the story outside of camp but we will see hehe there is always more guys to corrupt
8/1/23, 2:28 AM
The world building is so cool, cant wait to see where it goes next!