Recent Comments

7/30/23, 8:32 AM
I'm really glad Evan and Adam were able to reconcile their differences. Very sweet. Adam even gave Evan the gift of perverting him and helping him embrace debauchery. The overwhelming cloud of a weekend's worth of masturbation and sweat incapacitating Evan when he opened the doors was a great touch. The trap was clearly laid well. It's interesting to see this, knowing what Christian did in his dorm. That the stench itself is more gradual, able to resisted for a little while until it really takes hold unless it is concentrated. The dorm room heater really gains another layer with this in mind. Seeing the larger picture with this story, that there are many other goonfiends lurking around campus, is exciting. We knew Christian wasn't the first but we didn't have a sense that he wasn't the only one working on ensnaring a lot of others with horny smell to get their brains leaking out their cocks. Your roommate to share the love of gooning is one thing, but a full frat house is a new level. But that seems to be the nature of the condition after seeing its origins. I love that. Everyone should get to enjoy it. ;) Seeing this crossing over with Christian and his roomie's corrupting the frat house was a nice surprise. It makes me think that the sports team Stenchers were planning something like that themselves but showed up to find they could just relax and enjoy the masses of frat bros fixated on cum and pleasure instead.

7/31/23, 2:15 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) Thanks for your comment, bro! I’m definitely excited to get into this next phase of the story.
7/30/23, 10:28 PM
I approved this, but you may want to consider switching the many many black quotes used for dialogue in the story to quotation marks "like this" -- I think it would make the story easier and more enjoyable for readers to read. As it stands, I found those block quotes really took me out of the flow of the story. This is a fun concept! Nicely done!

7/31/23, 12:23 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) Hello, my dear! Thank you so much for your comment. I was really thinking the same when I read again, after publishing. I will mark the cotes "this form" on next chapters. <3

7/31/23, 12:29 AM
@[JotaJ23](/user/show/10036383) Hi Jota! It's also possible to edit this chapter by using the Author and Reviewer panel if you like!

7/31/23, 12:37 AM
@[time.to.occur](/user/show/1662851) I'll do that as soon as possible! Thanks! <3
7/31/23, 12:33 AM
Amazing how fast he changed from agent to fuck boy. The wonders of modern science. I'd love access to such a set up and start turning out perfect lovers. The physical transformation was fast but the psychological one was a slow burn.
Nov 1, 2021
7/30/23, 11:26 PM
I can't believe you managed to get so much into so tight a story. That was seriously hot!
Anonymous
7/30/23, 11:12 PM
I live to serve the virus.
7/30/23, 10:47 PM
Hot story and really well written. Great pacing and quite a sexy arc.
Jul 30, 2023
7/30/23, 10:14 PM
Great premise! It's a fun premise and the overwhelming musky cum messing with Lucius's mind is very hot. Kyle seems to have a real problem. I hope he can find a solution to his constant cumming in large volumes.
prettyrickifag@yahoo.com
7/30/23, 10:00 PM
Oh, she sounds so pretty and so happy -- with a man's body and a girl's pussy! She is so lucky to be Taylor's bride and to be able to serve and satisfy him the rest of her life!
7/30/23, 9:43 PM
This concept is a great mix of humor and hot, love it!
Anonymous
7/30/23, 8:41 PM
Still wishing without hope,of another chapter involving the poor slutty Jimmy