@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) Hi. I do read the comments, especially ones with requests or input on what they want to see. I don't necessarily grant all but I definitely appreciate the engagement. I don't know if I can manage to do filler chapters since it might distract me from the main story, plus I can just change the PoV if I have some idea to add.

@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) I don’t think filler is necissary. If they were all gay yes there would be infighting but their enslavement is based on “love” or really “affection” but on simple requirement and property. Property wouldn’t get jealous.

@[Mstr4slvs](/user/show/908350) Okay, maybe "filler" is too much, as this story has a good pace as it stands. However, in my experience reading stories with a harem, the tendency is always to accumulate more and more slaves to the point where we don't even remember the physical description and the plot becomes more and more scalable, to the point where, for example, in chapter 1 the protagonist is controlling the roommate and in 6 he is controlling the entire police corps of the city in the easiest possible way. Sexy? A little. Lazy and tiring? Quite. And that is definitely not and should not be the case here. Dexter has a modus operandi that consists of using the moral weaknesses or insecurities of the guys he wants to bring them in his sway. And this craft restriction is one of the factors that makes this series very interesting for me. Eventually, the author will want to end his story in some way and can justify his ending with a timeskip, but I believe that, in this series, he should add the men little by little, with a plausible motivation, to avoid information overload. After having the three desired athletes from the beginning of the story at his mercy, Dexter only controlled the janitor as he will be useful to give access to the coach and the other athletes on the team. Mr. Bauer also to get his house for filming. That is, no slaves for nothing. I myself would love several new profiles of jocks, muscle guys and fit dads being mind controlled. Arab guys, Russians (Actually, any hot guy between Romania and Russia is especially sexy to me), an especially hairy guy, a bald guy (why aren't there guys with shaved heads in these stories? A lot of porn actors I watch are bald or shaved), among others. As for the chapters themselves, this series has many opportunities for stories that, while not "advance the plot" but promote strong interaction between characters and provide useful information to be used later. For now I imagine two interesting situations: Pajama party at Rich's house, where he can spend the day enjoying the perks of the house and a full day of filming in his porn studio, with the guys performing and doing different naughty things. Finally, I believe that the brainwashing that Dexter has imposed on his men consists of putting their master above himself in every way, but otherwise they are still themselves. Chad is still brutish, loyal, and simple-minded; Cody is still seductive and confident in his attributes; and Rich is still smart and cunning. And as much as Dexter restricts the conflict between them by giving direct orders, the animosities between them (like between Cody and Rich) as well as possible new conflicts, will not go away and cannot be avoided.

@[Sexcrab](/user/show/10027159) I hear you. Characters are often projections of what writers find sexy. I’ll make Coach Jenkins specifically ethnically non-descript so you can imagine to make him look like anything you want him to be. Honestly, I never really thought there’s a whole lot of difference in how German ethnics (the Bauers) or a Slavic / Eastern European person looks like.

@[avionneX](/user/show/1683719) Thank you for your consideration, but I don't want you to feel obligated to restrict your creativity. You must write what feels good to you. My quotes from male types in the previous answer do not exactly reflect all my preferences, but profiles of characters that I hardly see in the vast majority of stories on this site, but that I also find very attractive. Therefore, this does not concern you especially. In fact, in this case I even find it more plausible that Coach Jenkins is a very muscular Caucasian man (despite being almost an elderly man), given the fact that the story takes place in a country town. PS: I have a secret: I have my own cast of "actors" for the roles of slaves in the stories I read and not always who I "cast" has a profile that is exactly consistent with the stories, although most of the time I choose the most similar stud possible or someone compatible I'm currently craving. Unfortunately for me, this also means that there are a lot of desirable guys that I hardly ever picture for my hypnoerotic readings.