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7/29/23, 3:55 AM
Thanks man! Keep writing
GreekSkeletoon
7/29/23, 3:52 AM
I LOVE this story. Please keep going! Everything is on point and I enjoy it a lot.
7/29/23, 2:50 AM
I totally agree with the previous comments about how good this chapter was. I've liked this whole series a lot so far. I love how the stench takes them over and changes them. And it's a really nice literary device that you use with the gooner words start to pop up in all caps. As a reader I find that really draws me into the process taking them over, and I'm saying those words out loud over and over as I bate to the story.
Nutiper
7/29/23, 2:21 AM
This chapter definitely had some of the hottest moments for me — the way Bryce is bewildered while navigating his new body and its overwhelming slutty desires is _very_ fun. And especially with his roommate Andrew casually reading off all the slutty traits that a "Bryce" like him should have, and Bryce being all _shit, is that really going to be my life now?_ And then, as Andrew quickly proves when he whips out his dick: yes, Bryce, yes it will. The sequence with both Andrews is definitely my favorite. Especially when the sight of the second Andrew causes Bryce to stop and stutter and act even more like a stereotypical slut than he even intended, all while both Andrews are laughing at him. Whew. That vibe in that sequence is just _extremely_ hot. Well done.
7/29/23, 12:42 AM
Can't wait for chapter 3. The hard or soft part did it for me. Is there a side effect to the paint? Will it be absorbed into the skin and become permanent? Will the slightly toxic eventually effect those that suck on something that was painted? Thanks for sharing.

7/29/23, 12:52 AM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) Side-effect to the paint, huh? Interesting idea! How many suggestions can a man receive under the influence of the paint until... perhaps he doesn't need the paint at all? Hmmm....

7/29/23, 2:13 AM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Will Dwight's pecs be painted enough times that they remain shiny? George thought he cleaned them with the paint remover but it's absorbed into his pores. He's sent home to Julius and accidentally pecnotizes him.
Nutiper
7/29/23, 2:11 AM
I love this chapter. Bryce meeting all the other Bryces... The twist at the end... The sequence with the Walters... The bit with the toy was particularly fun, especially this bit: > I realized now that the other Bryce hadn’t been acting, at least not as much as I thought. I couldn’t help but moan like a whore as the toy radiated against my prostate. Whatever it was about this device, its size, the frequency, it was made for Bryces, and I was helpless to the pleasure it provided. There's something really erotic in how Bryce's body has been changing so much, thanks to his new name, that he's helpless even against a mindless vibrating dildo... all because it was _made_ to bring Bryces like him to a state of mindless slutty pleasure. And he can't resist what it does to him. Hot!
puppy boi
7/28/23, 7:10 PM
These series is so good and hot on so many levels.. like pls i can't wait to see how this continues...

7/29/23, 2:06 AM
@puppy boi Oh thank you so much. I do have the next part all planned out, I just have too many stories I need to write and finding time to get to it is tough right now.
Nutiper
7/29/23, 2:06 AM
I loved this story. It's such a damn _funny_ and literal way to interpret the contest prompt... but then the premise gets spun out into detailed sci-fi worldbuilding, and just keeps getting bigger and bigger, and ends up encompassing a secret counterculture deep under the city, and a whole thesis on identity? While at the same time having some extremely _hot_ scenarios... whew. I was following this while it was being posted, and I got nervous you wouldn't manage to write the final chapter in time — I was like "nooo I have to know how it ends!" Seeing each new chapter pop up was a delight every time. I'm so glad you wrote this and managed to post it in time! There have been a lot of hot stories in this contest and it's pretty stiff (lol) competition, but I'm rooting for this story. Plus I want more people to read it! Definitely among my favorite recent stories on the site.
7/29/23, 12:49 AM
There is something about this series that really pushes my buttons. I think it's the inevitability of losing control. The inability to resist the power of the stench working away to corrupt them into a stink addicted gooner bater. Making them appreciate the scent and the pleasure and then being equipped to spread that joy to others.

7/29/23, 1:14 AM
@[Evan Jackson](/user/show/133763) I’ve appreciated seeing all your thoughts! I hope I can continue to please 🙏

7/29/23, 1:28 AM
@[BateSeeker](/user/show/235651) I have every confidence you will and am _eagerly_ awaiting the next chapter!! Can never have enough.