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7/29/23, 6:15 AM
Fun bagatelles. I'd love to find out what other goodies your mind holds.
Anonymous
7/29/23, 6:10 AM
Really hoping this new development with Stephen leads into a mass-conversion/enslavement scenario :stuck_out_tongue:
7/29/23, 5:20 AM
This was fun but it felt so fast! Could easily become one if my faves if it was more fleshed out and descriptive.
7/29/23, 3:55 AM
Thanks man! Keep writing
GreekSkeletoon
7/29/23, 3:52 AM
I LOVE this story. Please keep going! Everything is on point and I enjoy it a lot.
7/29/23, 2:50 AM
I totally agree with the previous comments about how good this chapter was. I've liked this whole series a lot so far. I love how the stench takes them over and changes them. And it's a really nice literary device that you use with the gooner words start to pop up in all caps. As a reader I find that really draws me into the process taking them over, and I'm saying those words out loud over and over as I bate to the story.
Nutiper
7/29/23, 2:21 AM
This chapter definitely had some of the hottest moments for me — the way Bryce is bewildered while navigating his new body and its overwhelming slutty desires is _very_ fun. And especially with his roommate Andrew casually reading off all the slutty traits that a "Bryce" like him should have, and Bryce being all _shit, is that really going to be my life now?_ And then, as Andrew quickly proves when he whips out his dick: yes, Bryce, yes it will. The sequence with both Andrews is definitely my favorite. Especially when the sight of the second Andrew causes Bryce to stop and stutter and act even more like a stereotypical slut than he even intended, all while both Andrews are laughing at him. Whew. That vibe in that sequence is just _extremely_ hot. Well done.
7/29/23, 12:42 AM
Can't wait for chapter 3. The hard or soft part did it for me. Is there a side effect to the paint? Will it be absorbed into the skin and become permanent? Will the slightly toxic eventually effect those that suck on something that was painted? Thanks for sharing.

7/29/23, 12:52 AM
@[TexMuscle](/user/show/10002223) Side-effect to the paint, huh? Interesting idea! How many suggestions can a man receive under the influence of the paint until... perhaps he doesn't need the paint at all? Hmmm....

7/29/23, 2:13 AM
@[Colin DV](/user/show/10038060) Will Dwight's pecs be painted enough times that they remain shiny? George thought he cleaned them with the paint remover but it's absorbed into his pores. He's sent home to Julius and accidentally pecnotizes him.