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5/11/25, 6:34 AM
This is not a dig at you at all, you’re a fantastic writer for sure. I’m not usually phased by much but for some reason that couch scene unsettled me beyond anything I’ve read here before, wow! Good job

lukas pucci
5/11/25, 5:50 PM
@[Ballbustingkid](/user/show/913956) dudee what an awesome comment! I know the couch scene is quiet, but for me, that silence was the most dangerous part of it. I wanted the tension to come from the stillness, the things not said. u got it
5/11/25, 6:50 AM
I don't have any sophistcated analysis, this is hot as fuck

5/11/25, 8:45 PM
@[Humper](/user/show/10051644) Hah, that's good enough for me! This was an experiment in trying to blend spiritual 'sensations' with erotica while still keeping it hot. Sounds like it worked—and I'm going to be coming out with stories soon that have a _lot_ more of that.
5/11/25, 8:23 AM
Class story mate hope it becomes a series maybe with him seducin more str8s. Tho might be worth goin back over this wan an removin all the the sentences that repeat the exact same words

5/11/25, 4:49 PM
@[DarkFox](/user/show/10021702) Thanks, bruv. It is my first use of AI. I’ll try to clean it up in the future.
Boomer
5/11/25, 10:29 AM
Oh this is great. The slow easing into it, the manipulation. Awesome.

lukas pucci
5/11/25, 5:49 PM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) glad u liked it cause it’s only gonna get worse.

Boomer
5/13/25, 10:44 AM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) I can't wait, worse is best
5/11/25, 10:37 AM
All the options sound amazing, can’t wait for part 2. Maybe even multiple of them at once would be fun!
5/11/25, 12:05 PM
Fuck I am loving this series!!!
Anonymous
5/11/25, 12:10 PM
Will this ever be continued? I’ve been checking back every week to see if it will be!!
Zander
5/11/25, 12:56 PM
Great story, it's a pity that it comes out too slow and this is the only minus so far (because of this, the reader forgets what was in the previous chapters) and the story becomes boring. I hope there will be no more such a long break between chapters and the story will be continued. I also hope for a lot of interaction between the characters and the appearance of new villains) Our hero needs to open his own Bureau for Investigation of Hypnosis and Mind Control and do his own thing and help people. For example, a hypnotist captured men in a family in the neighborhood, our hero found out about this and decided to help by capturing the hypnotist with evidence so that he would be arrested and put in a special prison where his powers would not help him and there would be mostly female guards in the prison.
5/11/25, 1:41 PM
Awesome start! I'm excited to see where the story goes.
5/11/25, 3:03 PM
Hot. Both of them turned into complete cock sluts for BBC. Very hot.