Recent Comments

Boomer
5/11/25, 10:29 AM
Oh this is great. The slow easing into it, the manipulation. Awesome.

lukas pucci
5/11/25, 5:49 PM
@[Boomer](/user/show/10007241) glad u liked it cause it’s only gonna get worse.

Boomer
5/13/25, 10:44 AM
@[lukas pucci](/user/show/10040865) I can't wait, worse is best
5/11/25, 10:37 AM
All the options sound amazing, can’t wait for part 2. Maybe even multiple of them at once would be fun!
5/11/25, 12:05 PM
Fuck I am loving this series!!!
Anonymous
5/11/25, 12:10 PM
Will this ever be continued? I’ve been checking back every week to see if it will be!!
Zander
5/11/25, 12:56 PM
Great story, it's a pity that it comes out too slow and this is the only minus so far (because of this, the reader forgets what was in the previous chapters) and the story becomes boring. I hope there will be no more such a long break between chapters and the story will be continued. I also hope for a lot of interaction between the characters and the appearance of new villains) Our hero needs to open his own Bureau for Investigation of Hypnosis and Mind Control and do his own thing and help people. For example, a hypnotist captured men in a family in the neighborhood, our hero found out about this and decided to help by capturing the hypnotist with evidence so that he would be arrested and put in a special prison where his powers would not help him and there would be mostly female guards in the prison.
5/11/25, 1:41 PM
Awesome start! I'm excited to see where the story goes.
5/11/25, 3:03 PM
Hot. Both of them turned into complete cock sluts for BBC. Very hot.
5/11/25, 3:18 PM
Very interesting, can't wait to read more
5/11/25, 3:54 PM
Mmmm hero used as a breeding ground. Love that. And 'Sharkstrike' is a great hero name.

5/12/25, 12:38 PM
@[Ebonart](/user/show/129869) Thank you <33333
5/11/25, 4:26 PM
Hot stuff! It's well written but I did notice a few repeated or very similar sentences that broke up the flow a little bit.

5/11/25, 4:49 PM
@[Loxley](/user/show/75942) Thanks, mate. First time using AI. Will try to do more editing next time.