Recent Comments

7/27/23, 9:54 PM
Loving this story so much. It's so well written and I love Jon... Jonathan piecing together the bits of thos new life. Nicely done.
7/27/23, 8:41 PM
It's a particularly nasty story 🤢
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7/27/23, 8:14 PM
Jon is moving into the role so many of us fantasize about and wish we had. Total servant to a Superior Lover and bystander as that Lover sexually satisfies himself with other Superior Men. Wonderfully hot story so far! Notwithstanding some of the previous comments, the roles each of the two are assuming would be a very happy ending for many of us.
7/27/23, 4:14 PM
I truly hope there will be a happy and good ending ._.
7/26/23, 8:43 PM
We're building towards the end, friends—I know this feels like yet another transitional chapter, but I'm trying to line up bigger events in the subsequent chapters.

Zander
7/27/23, 12:36 AM
@[Promethol](/user/show/241079) Thanks for the chapter, I look forward to continuing. I hope John will succeed and Greg will remember him (I also hope the chapters will be longer if possible) and there will be more sex scenes.

7/27/23, 3:24 PM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) My thoughts exactly: This is so well written that it has held my interest [although I had hoped for more sexual material, as well]....We will just have to wait-&-see I guess....
7/27/23, 3:06 PM
Can't wait to see where this goes. I hope the 2 boys end up fat old men and the step-dad ends up a hot slave boy that worships the others and pleases their needs!
7/27/23, 2:43 PM
This was outstanding, I loved it! Can't wait to see what you work on next
7/27/23, 1:11 PM
Great story
Jul 22, 2023
7/27/23, 12:54 PM
Great story! What a fantastic makeover. I love that Adonis Ken is just as connected to his kids as dutiful Dad Steve. Interesting too to see the positive impact of Ken’s perfect genes and fabulousness on future Asher.
7/27/23, 12:39 PM
Shame this wasn’t continued