Recent Comments

7/22/23, 9:30 AM
I am not sure if I like it or not. I love the way you write and it's hot, what is happening. But I don't like a setting. I am very agains bully getting his way and winning. It is not my book and probably by the point you read it, you would be more than halfway through next chapter, but wat I would like to see is for Matt to take control of both Eddie and his family. Just saying. And as I said those are just my preferences, so write how you like. We will enjoy the ride. Btw I still remember when Matt said to his older brother not to get involved, so Eddie calling Matt coward for calling brother for help is a lie. So I hope he will have a courage to turn the tide in wis winning way.

7/22/23, 2:01 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I would also like a scenario like this. It would be interesting to see that kind of twist where Matt gets control over Eddie, his father and his brother. But as it is now, Matt doesn't want to use his family for his pleasure, he just wants to free them from Eddie's control, so in my opinion, there are still some things that need to happen that lead him to the point of wanting to keep his family under this state of slavery.

7/27/23, 2:46 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I mean… do we know that? If he IS a coward maybe he is getting angry that his “bully” is doing all the things he WISH he could do? Maybe he is jealous?
7/27/23, 2:42 AM
Loved the chapter. Excellent series so far. Kind of wondering though if his next step would be experimenting enslaving a group of people at once.
Apr 2, 2022
faggy baby
4/9/22, 12:49 PM
I enjoyed the story and hope for more.

7/28/22, 9:46 AM
@faggy baby Hey, glad you liked it. I‘m really busy atm but I do already have a general idea for the second chapter, on which i will be starting as soon as I get the time. The 2nd. Chapter is definitely not forgotten. Stay tuned!

7/27/23, 12:04 AM
@faggy baby Hey hey, just wanted to answer to your comment again to let you and others know that I haven’t forgotten about this story! I did have an original draft for the second chapter but honestly I didn’t really feel it for a while and then I just kinda didn’t care to be honest. But the last couple of weeks I randomly got ideas for that 2nd. chapter that I really want to get down so I am currently in the process of actually writing it! Please stay tuned and also do get back to me if you or anyone else reading this has any ideas of things that I could include to make the second chapter way better then the first one :) See ya!
7/26/23, 10:35 PM
I hope theres a way to fix Wash's size but also him and Harvey be lovers in the end. Maybe they could make him big again but not to his original size and he end up smaller than Harvey. And he would enjoy Harvey mandhandling and playing with him. Ooh i like that.

7/26/23, 11:19 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Awesome idea but it's Ziel's story.
7/26/23, 10:42 PM
Great story!
7/26/23, 1:47 PM
Awesome story, I could not put it down!!!!

7/26/23, 10:37 PM
@[br6205](/user/show/10027864) Thank you for the kind words. Knowing the length of the story, I know that couldn't have been an easy task, haha!
7/20/23, 9:24 AM
Outstanding work. I just sent off a story more or less along the same lines. We think alike. Love inter-racial stuff. Most especially with Chinese doms. Bravo!

7/20/23, 9:44 AM
@[LarsonF](/user/show/10037194) Did you just do it now or was it rejected because of the rules? I'd love to read it!

7/20/23, 1:01 PM
@[James Heller](/user/show/907806) I just sent it in a couple of hours ago. Do you have some fantasies yourself? lol I think it will be ok, at least the format is nice and clean. Look out for it! Love to hear your thoughts.

Lampshade15
7/26/23, 3:09 PM
@[LarsonF](/user/show/10037194) Hey, I was wondering if the story's been uploaded? I'd love to read it. More stories like AgainstMyWill's would be great!

7/26/23, 9:32 PM
@[Lampshade15](/user/show/277649) I think you will find my stories at the following link. https://www.gaykinkystories.com/user/listStories/10037194 Time restraints have delayed the third and fourth chapters a bit - though I'm working on them!
7/26/23, 9:27 PM
Amazing
7/26/23, 9:23 PM
I loved the quality of the writing more than anything else -- the only thing that took me out of it was the very much unlikely thing where a gay man would rip off his husband's clothes and fuck him right in front of America. Maybe a touch too far in the fantasy? ;-) but I loved the exhibitionism, the lust, the wantonness, and the amazing Stepford Wives story. Just very well done.