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7/27/23, 6:42 AM
Another great chapter in the story. Can't wait to see how this plays out!
7/27/23, 5:48 AM
It's getting even more hot!
7/27/23, 5:36 AM
Uh oh. Stephen became proof of concept for something that can speed up making more beefed up submissive wrestlers without shattering their minds entirely. Hot stuff! Great little surprise.
7/27/23, 3:11 AM
Good to see your name again popping up! I love your stories!
7/22/23, 9:30 AM
I am not sure if I like it or not. I love the way you write and it's hot, what is happening. But I don't like a setting. I am very agains bully getting his way and winning. It is not my book and probably by the point you read it, you would be more than halfway through next chapter, but wat I would like to see is for Matt to take control of both Eddie and his family. Just saying. And as I said those are just my preferences, so write how you like. We will enjoy the ride. Btw I still remember when Matt said to his older brother not to get involved, so Eddie calling Matt coward for calling brother for help is a lie. So I hope he will have a courage to turn the tide in wis winning way.

7/22/23, 2:01 PM
@[Iriefall](/user/show/10019488) I would also like a scenario like this. It would be interesting to see that kind of twist where Matt gets control over Eddie, his father and his brother. But as it is now, Matt doesn't want to use his family for his pleasure, he just wants to free them from Eddie's control, so in my opinion, there are still some things that need to happen that lead him to the point of wanting to keep his family under this state of slavery.

7/27/23, 2:46 AM
@[Gatuno](/user/show/10021894) I mean… do we know that? If he IS a coward maybe he is getting angry that his “bully” is doing all the things he WISH he could do? Maybe he is jealous?
7/27/23, 2:42 AM
Loved the chapter. Excellent series so far. Kind of wondering though if his next step would be experimenting enslaving a group of people at once.
Apr 2, 2022
faggy baby
4/9/22, 12:49 PM
I enjoyed the story and hope for more.

7/28/22, 9:46 AM
@faggy baby Hey, glad you liked it. I‘m really busy atm but I do already have a general idea for the second chapter, on which i will be starting as soon as I get the time. The 2nd. Chapter is definitely not forgotten. Stay tuned!

7/27/23, 12:04 AM
@faggy baby Hey hey, just wanted to answer to your comment again to let you and others know that I haven’t forgotten about this story! I did have an original draft for the second chapter but honestly I didn’t really feel it for a while and then I just kinda didn’t care to be honest. But the last couple of weeks I randomly got ideas for that 2nd. chapter that I really want to get down so I am currently in the process of actually writing it! Please stay tuned and also do get back to me if you or anyone else reading this has any ideas of things that I could include to make the second chapter way better then the first one :) See ya!
7/26/23, 10:35 PM
I hope theres a way to fix Wash's size but also him and Harvey be lovers in the end. Maybe they could make him big again but not to his original size and he end up smaller than Harvey. And he would enjoy Harvey mandhandling and playing with him. Ooh i like that.

7/26/23, 11:19 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Awesome idea but it's Ziel's story.
7/26/23, 10:42 PM
Great story!