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7/26/23, 6:39 AM
So close yet so far with the coach. I'm curious about his sense of smell!
Muscle-Flex
7/26/23, 2:57 AM
I saw that the "Unpublished edits" banner came down, so I re-read the story including the part with Rags the drunkard that had been missing. Great addition! Added nicely to Dirk and Deuce's humiliation and helpfully showed how the symbols worked on the brains of the sheriff and his deputy. On the second read, some other things caught my attention: the things on Dirk's to-do list! The doctor, the tailor, maybe a haircut, the fences... uh oh! Who knows what's going to happen to the big muscular cowboy, but those appointments might just turn into perilous predicaments... ripe for trouble and... humiliation. Hee hee hee.

7/26/23, 4:24 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Hello again, my friend! a kind reader told me that a part of the story was missing, and I was just about to send you a message to tell you that the full chapter was already avaliabe. Thank you very much for read it again! You have a good eye, the list it's a foreshadow of things to come :smiling_imp:. A little change on my daily schedule will allow me to work more on this story and another one I have published, so hopefully soon you'll be able to read what's next for Dork and Dunce... oops! :hand_over_mouth: Dirk and Deuce, I mean :grin:.
7/26/23, 2:39 AM
This is one of the best stories EVER on this site. My heart jumped when I saw there was a new chapter and I’m still reeling from reading this one. I will come back for a proper review soon!!
Anonymous
7/26/23, 1:59 AM
this is boner nnnnnngh
Jul 22, 2023
7/25/23, 10:13 PM
I think this actually transcends smut, though it certainly has all the requisite features required, because I've left the story not only knowing poor drab Steve, but also knowing Liberace Ken, and both were fascinating studies. I liked how the transformations that took place were gradual and seemed to happen with the situations he was in. The only thing that confused me was the Future-Asher appearance. Was that literally just a random dream?

7/26/23, 12:04 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for the nice words! The dream was meant to foreshadow not only the drastic transformation Steve would go through, but also the "butterfly effect" of it affecting everyone around him, including his family (and, I guess, his DNA!)
7/25/23, 11:52 PM
I would love to see this continue to other guys, jocks, homophobes etc.
7/25/23, 1:47 PM
Your characters are so real and so fucking hot. You sell their straightness so well that when we watch them doing gay things it feels all the hotter! Every little scene from beginning to end is fun as hell, one romp after another, and I love all the cum and pre Benito makes; that shit gets me going. You wrapped everything up perfectly. This is a real winner.

7/25/23, 10:53 PM
@[Soren Fitz](/user/show/10011670) Thank you for the kind words, Soren. I had a lot of fun outlining and writing the characters, so I'm especially glad to hear that folks enjoyed them. > and I love all the cum and pre Benito makes; that shit gets me going. Oh, I believe you! :stuck_out_tongue_winking_eye:
7/25/23, 3:17 AM
That was terrific. Can't wait to see who the author is.

7/25/23, 10:48 PM
@[Jockboy Joe](/user/show/910088) We shall see! :wink:
Martin
7/25/23, 8:37 PM
What a fantastic and inventive story! Amazing!

7/25/23, 10:32 PM
@[Martin](/user/show/125990) Thank you!
7/25/23, 6:42 PM
Oh wow, another great chapter. Siege turned to sex doll or i mean robot. It would have been fun calling him The Sexbot. But ehh, Cockbot is also hot. Simon being a Simon Says hero/slave is a great touch.

7/25/23, 9:58 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Cheers! Glad you liked it! :D