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7/26/23, 10:13 AM
Very cool use of that one single command, I hope we get more of this story soon, I’m hooked
Anonymous
7/26/23, 8:39 AM
I wanna see Steve made to wear slutty lace thong panties all the time. his tiny dick can fit in them perfectly, they will show off his hot ass, and the soft lace rubbing against his dick all day long will keep him rock hard and leaking into the panties like a slut.
7/22/23, 8:18 PM
The arousal level grows... and shrinks.

7/26/23, 6:52 AM
@[Cutlerfan](/user/show/14171) Yep ;) Although there's not a whole lot left of Wash, so they'll have to figure something out fast.
7/26/23, 6:44 AM
Good for Jimmy,honestly! It was time someone whisked his mind away and started thinking for him. He should only be concerned about being a muscle toy
7/26/23, 6:39 AM
So close yet so far with the coach. I'm curious about his sense of smell!
Muscle-Flex
7/26/23, 2:57 AM
I saw that the "Unpublished edits" banner came down, so I re-read the story including the part with Rags the drunkard that had been missing. Great addition! Added nicely to Dirk and Deuce's humiliation and helpfully showed how the symbols worked on the brains of the sheriff and his deputy. On the second read, some other things caught my attention: the things on Dirk's to-do list! The doctor, the tailor, maybe a haircut, the fences... uh oh! Who knows what's going to happen to the big muscular cowboy, but those appointments might just turn into perilous predicaments... ripe for trouble and... humiliation. Hee hee hee.

7/26/23, 4:24 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Hello again, my friend! a kind reader told me that a part of the story was missing, and I was just about to send you a message to tell you that the full chapter was already avaliabe. Thank you very much for read it again! You have a good eye, the list it's a foreshadow of things to come :smiling_imp:. A little change on my daily schedule will allow me to work more on this story and another one I have published, so hopefully soon you'll be able to read what's next for Dork and Dunce... oops! :hand_over_mouth: Dirk and Deuce, I mean :grin:.
7/26/23, 2:39 AM
This is one of the best stories EVER on this site. My heart jumped when I saw there was a new chapter and I’m still reeling from reading this one. I will come back for a proper review soon!!
Anonymous
7/26/23, 1:59 AM
this is boner nnnnnngh
Jul 22, 2023
7/25/23, 10:13 PM
I think this actually transcends smut, though it certainly has all the requisite features required, because I've left the story not only knowing poor drab Steve, but also knowing Liberace Ken, and both were fascinating studies. I liked how the transformations that took place were gradual and seemed to happen with the situations he was in. The only thing that confused me was the Future-Asher appearance. Was that literally just a random dream?

7/26/23, 12:04 AM
@[DaymionMC](/user/show/10033419) Thank you for the nice words! The dream was meant to foreshadow not only the drastic transformation Steve would go through, but also the "butterfly effect" of it affecting everyone around him, including his family (and, I guess, his DNA!)
7/25/23, 11:52 PM
I would love to see this continue to other guys, jocks, homophobes etc.