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RebelHeart
7/25/23, 6:12 PM
HOT!! definitely want to read more
7/25/23, 2:02 AM
Still in awe over your ability to publish such hot, interesting works so quickly! It definitely feels like it's all doom and gloom for the heroes since the element of surprise is gone. It's a little sad that no one got to enjoy Siege's twunk body before his modification, but I'm sure he's doing great now :) I realize that you keep the heroes in their costumes as an extra humiliation, unlike the Azure Defender. A shame to keep their sexy hero bodies hidden like that, but the Subduer probably enjoys it better that way. Feathertouch is definitely going to do a number on Gold Force, and I can't wait to see what happens.

7/25/23, 8:42 AM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) Thanks Larry! Yes; The Subduer has learned his lesson after devouring The Azure Defender too swiftly. Now he keeps his new 'treats' in their wrappers until he is ready to savor them,... After all, any collectible should be kept pristine and in their original packaging to maintain value! Oh, and don't rule Gold Force out yet! He's managed to escape and has time to regroup, only now he's even more determined!

7/25/23, 2:44 PM
@[Blazargus](/user/show/10012784) Gold Force is going to have a rude awakening when he finds out his helicarrier has been stolen. Inviting more heroes almost seems like a disastrous step to take, but will Gold Force sacrifice even more heroes to save his man?

7/25/23, 2:51 PM
@[Larry](/user/show/494946) Who knows what will happen? :3
7/25/23, 2:08 PM
This was one of the best I’ve read in a long, long time. Bravo!
7/25/23, 2:06 PM
I really wish I was around in the days of SlaveNow so I could've read all your other stories as well... this is some of the best erotic slave fiction I've ever seen and it's a shame it's all lost to history :(
7/25/23, 9:13 AM
This was really great, I can't wait to see how this continue.
7/25/23, 4:00 AM
Bravo! A fun concept. I encourage you to keep at it.

7/25/23, 8:37 AM
@[Rock Creek Werewolf](/user/show/10002145) Thank you very much! I'm already working on the next chapter!
7/25/23, 7:46 AM
Incredible opening chapter. Hyped for the next.
The Sugar Cat
7/25/23, 3:50 AM
Like it so far, see some good potential: wild west humiliation! I'm interested in seeing just what sort of embarrassing hijinx are in store. From the sound of the graffiti, the two of them are about to become a couple of cowards, which is definitely an interesting fate for two rough and ready heroes. Only critique is a technical one. Not really sure where the old man comes into play, it is just suddenly stated that they two of them cannot understand "what the old man was yelling at them." Up until that point, I wasn't aware there was an old man watching them.

7/25/23, 6:22 AM
@The Sugar Cat There's lots of humilliation coming for our brave heroes, Sugar Cat! If humiliation is your thing, I think you're gonna like the rest of the story :yum:. Thanks a lot for telling me, about that, you made me realize there's a missing part of the story!! :flushed: I'll fix it and hopefully it will be visible soon. It's not too big, but it explain a bit more of the scene. Thank you! :blush:
7/25/23, 6:03 AM
This chapter was PERFECT! In addition to seeing all of the already-massive guys indulging in their size, we get to see how the food affects everyone on the base. Watching Will and Connor slowly getting seduced by the food--and especially Will justifying why he's getting fatter--is incredibly hot. They both seem aware of what's happening, but something is making them powerless to stop. That, plus the guys getting more affectionate, cuddly, and lazier, makes for an even better chapter than before. I can see why these scenes are your favorites--awesome work! :D
7/25/23, 4:48 AM
I love this story's concept so much! That Pete is unsuspecting and just sort of gets caught up in this is a really fun choice. That it makes him the low man in the demon pole makes it even better. I love the way the changes just sort of happen and feel inexorable -- they're an answer to a problem that Peter is having that lets him push himself further and grow. The descriptions of the transformations are really hot and so are the different kinds of changes. I loved to see Peter embracing his circumstances.