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7/25/23, 7:46 AM
Incredible opening chapter. Hyped for the next.
The Sugar Cat
7/25/23, 3:50 AM
Like it so far, see some good potential: wild west humiliation! I'm interested in seeing just what sort of embarrassing hijinx are in store. From the sound of the graffiti, the two of them are about to become a couple of cowards, which is definitely an interesting fate for two rough and ready heroes. Only critique is a technical one. Not really sure where the old man comes into play, it is just suddenly stated that they two of them cannot understand "what the old man was yelling at them." Up until that point, I wasn't aware there was an old man watching them.

7/25/23, 6:22 AM
@The Sugar Cat There's lots of humilliation coming for our brave heroes, Sugar Cat! If humiliation is your thing, I think you're gonna like the rest of the story :yum:. Thanks a lot for telling me, about that, you made me realize there's a missing part of the story!! :flushed: I'll fix it and hopefully it will be visible soon. It's not too big, but it explain a bit more of the scene. Thank you! :blush:
7/25/23, 6:03 AM
This chapter was PERFECT! In addition to seeing all of the already-massive guys indulging in their size, we get to see how the food affects everyone on the base. Watching Will and Connor slowly getting seduced by the food--and especially Will justifying why he's getting fatter--is incredibly hot. They both seem aware of what's happening, but something is making them powerless to stop. That, plus the guys getting more affectionate, cuddly, and lazier, makes for an even better chapter than before. I can see why these scenes are your favorites--awesome work! :D
7/25/23, 4:48 AM
I love this story's concept so much! That Pete is unsuspecting and just sort of gets caught up in this is a really fun choice. That it makes him the low man in the demon pole makes it even better. I love the way the changes just sort of happen and feel inexorable -- they're an answer to a problem that Peter is having that lets him push himself further and grow. The descriptions of the transformations are really hot and so are the different kinds of changes. I loved to see Peter embracing his circumstances.
7/25/23, 4:20 AM
Those fucking sexy daddies are really insatiable. Our protagonist needs put all these bitches (jocks and daddies) in their place.
Muscle-Flex
7/24/23, 11:12 PM
This is a great start! The premise is entertaining and Dirk and Deuce are fun characters. I'm definitely looking forward to your tales of this pair of hot cowboy studs. Yee haw! Your English is excellent, by-the-way! I don't think you need any help, but if you want someone to proofread it, just whistle... or send a message. :cowboy_hat_face:

7/25/23, 2:31 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thank you so much, @Muscle-Flex :blush:! I'm glad you enjoy it, and I hope you enjoy with the future changes on Dirk and Deuce. It's a great relief for me to hear that you think my English ihave a good level. It makes me very happy and it takes a great weight off my shoulders! Thank you very much for the offer, I'll surely write to you when I have the next chapter ready, I would really like you to take a look at it and in addition to some corrections, I would love to hear your comments. Although I have a very clear idea of where the story is going, I'm also open to hear suggestions :cowboy_hat_face:.
7/25/23, 2:44 AM
So, so glad you came back to this.
7/25/23, 2:33 AM
Oh wow interesting and fun and sexy. While I would prefer him being a dominant top him being a switch is fascinating. Him using Titles in Players and monsters is cool. Lots of potential and lots of fun.
7/25/23, 2:08 AM
I'm kinda hoping that Stephen will come up with something that will undo things and free Ethan from Ryan's hold. But I'm also interested in seeing if Stephen becomes a new model for the control the Coach and the school have on the wrestlers. But either way I'm looking forward to the next part of the story.
7/24/23, 9:24 PM
Oh my gosh, love the villains turning to superheroes (in a sense, since them being Faithful rangers are a menace to the society). I really hope you continue to expand this very hot and interesting universe you created.

7/25/23, 2:07 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I will, eventually. Have another story that needs some attention now that I can write again.