Recent Comments

7/25/23, 4:20 AM
Those fucking sexy daddies are really insatiable. Our protagonist needs put all these bitches (jocks and daddies) in their place.
Muscle-Flex
7/24/23, 11:12 PM
This is a great start! The premise is entertaining and Dirk and Deuce are fun characters. I'm definitely looking forward to your tales of this pair of hot cowboy studs. Yee haw! Your English is excellent, by-the-way! I don't think you need any help, but if you want someone to proofread it, just whistle... or send a message. :cowboy_hat_face:

7/25/23, 2:31 AM
@[Muscle-Flex](/user/show/2059714) Thank you so much, @Muscle-Flex :blush:! I'm glad you enjoy it, and I hope you enjoy with the future changes on Dirk and Deuce. It's a great relief for me to hear that you think my English ihave a good level. It makes me very happy and it takes a great weight off my shoulders! Thank you very much for the offer, I'll surely write to you when I have the next chapter ready, I would really like you to take a look at it and in addition to some corrections, I would love to hear your comments. Although I have a very clear idea of where the story is going, I'm also open to hear suggestions :cowboy_hat_face:.
7/25/23, 2:44 AM
So, so glad you came back to this.
7/25/23, 2:33 AM
Oh wow interesting and fun and sexy. While I would prefer him being a dominant top him being a switch is fascinating. Him using Titles in Players and monsters is cool. Lots of potential and lots of fun.
7/25/23, 2:08 AM
I'm kinda hoping that Stephen will come up with something that will undo things and free Ethan from Ryan's hold. But I'm also interested in seeing if Stephen becomes a new model for the control the Coach and the school have on the wrestlers. But either way I'm looking forward to the next part of the story.
7/24/23, 9:24 PM
Oh my gosh, love the villains turning to superheroes (in a sense, since them being Faithful rangers are a menace to the society). I really hope you continue to expand this very hot and interesting universe you created.

7/25/23, 2:07 AM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) I will, eventually. Have another story that needs some attention now that I can write again.
7/24/23, 7:28 PM
I loved your story, it was a wonderful read. Love to see it expanded. After all there are other colors that can be added to the Pride Rangers. Have a great day.

7/25/23, 2:06 AM
@[Cerian](/user/show/907826) Thank you, and there most certainly are.
7/24/23, 5:42 PM
Fantastic story. I was expecting them to have their colors changed to the pride flag colors, maybe have Alex join as the sixth ranger if/when they do.

7/25/23, 2:06 AM
@[Timet](/user/show/2640172) Their colors were set by the image which inspired this whole story, so their wasn't much chance for me to go changing any of them. Adding more colors might be on the table whenever I get around to adding on to this.
Elm
7/25/23, 1:50 AM
A litrpg story here? Awesome!
2309lsdakfj
7/25/23, 1:23 AM
Just got back from Europe, got a massage at a bathhouse -- scrub, tea, and soap -- thought of this story, and nearly came right there.