Recent Comments

slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/23/23, 4:23 PM
Damn this is a hot story! I love stories where the slave (or drone as in this case) slowly loses what he thought was his mind. Looking for ward to the full transformation and reprogramming!
Jul 23, 2023
7/23/23, 8:23 AM
Great story, and I'm really looking forward to the next development of this story, such as who this stranger originally is, what 'punishment' he will receive when his mission fails, maybe these professional teams can help him isolate some control, maybe the whole thing is part of a larger conspiracy. Anyway, I feel like the story can go on:grin:

7/23/23, 11:55 AM
@[GoJia](/user/show/23538) Oh the story can definitely go on. But as Hypnothrill said, the chapter ending is so ambiguous, you have to wonder what form will the story take. So when you read it, who were you rooting for?

7/23/23, 4:15 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I'm definitely rooting for the side of evil, and I'm very much looking forward to a bigger conspiracy that will trap everyone:heart_eyes:
7/23/23, 1:31 PM
Cant wait for the finale. Btw , i noticed that you posted this outside of the series that you created for the first two chapters

7/23/23, 4:03 PM
@[DJeiKier](/user/show/10021357) Hi. Glad you are enjoying it. Yes that error was unintentional. I always screw up that part.😉
Ben
7/23/23, 6:50 AM
Another favorite of mine!! I had forgotten what it was called and finally found it again through your story list!! 🔥 🔥 🔥

7/23/23, 3:29 PM
@[Ben](/user/show/10010133) Glad you liked it. Thank you for being a fan.
Jul 22, 2023
7/23/23, 1:37 PM
A surprisingly sweet story. He gets his identity rewritten, but finding out it was because of his daughter is kind of cute? The fact that he continues to think about and care about his kids really does it for me. The Asher stuff kind of seems like a red herring, but it helps keep his focus on his children, so it works. Good job, and thanks for the story.
7/23/23, 1:37 PM
As if I would need more incentive to masterbate. Look foreword to seeing where this is going.
felix
7/22/23, 6:54 PM
The quality of your writing and the development of these characters / their relationship has been really interesting and well-paced. It's not my usual taste, but the tags kept me coming back, and the shift in this new chapter have really caught my interest. I look forward to see what you do next!

7/23/23, 11:15 AM
@[felix](/user/show/2338654) Thanks mate, I appreciate the compliment. You know you've done well when you can keep people turned on against their normal nature!!
Island Jock
7/22/23, 7:05 PM
Such a great story!

7/23/23, 9:05 AM
@[Island Jock](/user/show/925246) Thank you
Zander
7/23/23, 12:49 AM
Thank you very much for continuing. I hope the next chapter will be longer. I hope we see Matt turn the game against Eddie and surprise him (I really want to see them fight). P.S. Is it just me, or does Eddie love Matt deep down but can't admit it to himself, which is why he's so obsessed with him and hates him?

7/23/23, 8:34 AM
@[Zander](/user/show/10015044) He does kinda seem to