Recent Comments

7/23/23, 3:55 AM
Well done. This was a great read.
7/21/23, 11:39 AM
Very hot - can’t wait to see where this goes next

7/23/23, 2:49 AM
@[U.K. guy](/user/show/1944978) Where would you like it to go? I'm still playing around with the next chapter. If you have any ideas, please let me know! Larson
7/22/23, 11:45 PM
Feel sorry for Bruce, but I don’t see how Bryce can accept a switch.
7/22/23, 11:09 PM
That was a great chapter! I love the expansion of the lore and my heart really goes out for Bruce. I really hope the Bryce will agree to give up his name and maybe go rouge for a while. As much as I love smutty sex, the philosophical talk was really nice. I like Arcade.
Jul 21, 2023
7/22/23, 10:24 PM
I wouldn’t mind being able to do that. Wow. That would get out of hand pretty quickly I’m afraid. I’m too big of a whore to wield that power. But it would sure be fun. Hot story Jack.

7/22/23, 10:25 PM
@[John Rogers](/user/show/10022487) Haha thanks bud, am glad you liked it!
Anonymous
7/22/23, 10:24 PM
I'm loving this story. You are such a great writer. I can see why some people are offended by the next chapter, but for me it is pure fiction and I don't take offense. I hope you will be able to continue this story elsewhere and I would love to read it.
Jul 21, 2023
7/21/23, 12:41 PM
Another great story! Hal will not be happy unless he continues to fuck himself.

7/22/23, 10:19 PM
@[mjkuhl](/user/show/10020940) Hal Jordan is so hot and there are so few stories about him...it's a shame
7/22/23, 5:46 PM
Congrats on finishing this masterpiece!

7/22/23, 10:14 PM
@[Max Lode](/user/show/338113) A masterpiece, you say—oh, do go on. No, I kid. I don’t need this to be my legacy, but I’m glad it’s caught some dudes in the cajones, as they say. I’m gratified you enjoyed it!
7/22/23, 9:33 AM
Spoilers for the other ending: Thank you S.Q.Neemie for sticking with the story and making the only choice that could have possible satisfied the very divided fanbase. I would personally have preferred a solution more in the middle. This happy ending is maybe a bit to happy. I really liked the bits about the corruption spreading in the world with the family gathering, the marines and so on. But the breaking of Blake was so heartbreaking and the complete lack of love and consideration for the sons so devastating that I have to go with this ending instead. The part when the Russos broke out of Tanners spell was especially heart warming. That family was so kind and wholesome before and it was really great to see that kindness restored. And I do like the idea of Jiang still out there continuing Tanners work. The small hints of his work just did not do it for me the same way the scenarios in the other ending did.

7/22/23, 10:11 PM
@[Lytcom](/user/show/602531) I did wonder about a middle road, but opinion was divided so passionately I thought it best to take both extremes. I probably am the problem with politics today. Thanks for reading and making such substantive comments—I really do appreciate them!
DadSonLover
7/21/23, 4:52 PM
I love this series so much!! It has been a fantastic ride. Thank you again for providing both the good and bad endings to this great series.

7/22/23, 10:09 PM
@DadSonLover Wild ride is right—can’t believe how long I’ve been at this one.